The story is marvellous and fantastic. The world-building is quite good as well as the character's design and their skills and interaction with other characters. However, I do not feel the comedy aspect as well as the early chapters. There are also some scenarios that are a bit forced (read the novel to know) and nonsensical. Some romance between the characters are a bit forced. The separation of the group is also somewhat forced. Overall however, the story is phenomenal. Great job, sir/ma'am.
Fantasy · Suiyan
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The story is marvellous and fantastic. The world-building is quite good as well as the character's design and their skills and interaction with other characters. However, I do not feel the comedy aspect as well as the early chapters. There are also some scenarios that are a bit forced (read the novel to know) and nonsensical. Some romance between the characters are a bit forced. The separation of the group is also somewhat forced. Overall however, the story is phenomenal. Great job, sir/ma'am.
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Fantasy · Suiyan