this book is going really good i like it. only thing is that you use "would" a lot like alott and I think u should use "is" or stuff like that to make it seem like its happening right now versus happening in the future if u know what I mean. but yeah keep going!!
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this book is going really good i like it. only thing is that you use "would" a lot like alott and I think u should use "is" or stuff like that to make it seem like its happening right now versus happening in the future if u know what I mean. but yeah keep going!!
Xenonia: The World Of Swords And Blood
Fantasy · AikoNakajima