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Seriously, one more of this "almost telling" thing and I drop the story.

That's just rather annoying and unnecessary. Seriously? Almost pulled out the necklace and then not...? That's just unnecessary delay.

So so so many typos and misspelled words. Would be interesting story, but very difficult to read.

Honestly, that was kinda clear and evident for me after that breakfast, when Cassandra played with the knife. I thought Lauren will connect the dots right there and then.

Alright, after reading all 90 chapters at once, I can say a more complex opinion. The story is interesting, good, runs on a few too many lines but so far manageable. What really bothers me though is the bad grammar and/or lack of proofreading. Lots of spelling mistakes, he/she his/her changeups, punctuation missing, etc. Also I don't see an update rate, which would be helpful. The story itself has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to reading it, hopefully with more frequent updates. Thank you Author!

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

wahhahhaaa (crying sounds) mooooooooore..... pleeeease 🥺❤️ iI just love their interactions.... and Merry Christmas to you Author! 😁🥰

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Yeeeeeee!

Okay, the story is still awesome, only one little issue: MORE CHAPTERS! Pleeeease ... 😁

Alright, it's time for me to comment, after reading that many chapters. :) I really enjoy reading this story, finally good grammar, good writing, interesting characters, nicely introduced landscape and background. Keep it coming!

Just one technical comment: this book would be so much better and enjoyable if the author wouldn't switch between past and present tense .. It's really jarring and disturbing while reading... Otherwise I'm quite enjoying it!