Badges 23
Moments 209
Alright, after reading all 90 chapters at once, I can say a more complex opinion. The story is interesting, good, runs on a few too many lines but so far manageable. What really bothers me though is the bad grammar and/or lack of proofreading. Lots of spelling mistakes, he/she his/her changeups, punctuation missing, etc. Also I don't see an update rate, which would be helpful. The story itself has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to reading it, hopefully with more frequent updates. Thank you Author!
ch 90 What rat?
The Black Hearted King's Swapped Bride
History · Faith_Andru
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 43 Chapter Forty-Three
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 43 Chapter Forty-Three
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 34 Chapter Thirty-Four
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 33 Chapter Thirty-Three
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
Yeeeeeee!
ch 32 Chapter Thirty-Two
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
Okay, the story is still awesome, only one little issue: MORE CHAPTERS! Pleeeease ... 😁
ch 32 Chapter Thirty-Two
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
Alright, it's time for me to comment, after reading that many chapters. :) I really enjoy reading this story, finally good grammar, good writing, interesting characters, nicely introduced landscape and background. Keep it coming!
ch 17 Chapter Seventeen
The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
Fantasy · SteamyWriter
Just one technical comment: this book would be so much better and enjoyable if the author wouldn't switch between past and present tense .. It's really jarring and disturbing while reading... Otherwise I'm quite enjoying it!
ch 25 25 A Strange Girl
Mated To The Lycan Prince
Fantasy · Sun_forever
Do you know where the novel can be read??
Do you know where the novel is available??
Yeah, that's what I thought too, like all her mannerisms when she's not acting just being herself, is totally like Edgar. 😆😆
"Well, I am not sorry about the separation. You should also remember how angry he made me. I know that I have hurt you but if there is ever anything you need, my doors are always open. I owe you for all the years you have kept me company. My doors are opened for your mother too as long as she doesn't come barging in screaming. So many headaches," Priscilla touched her head.
The Duke's Masked Wife
History · Violet_167
Yes!!! Good one! Basically after almost every chapter I'm saying "awwwwww"....
"I am liking this affectionate side of you. Unfortunately, my other cheek and lips will feel left out if you do not kiss them. So," Edgar pulled her closer, ignoring the judgemental stares of jealous people who secretly wish they could be in their position. "Give them equal attention."
The Duke's Masked Wife
History · Violet_167
A very captivating and interesting story, with plenty of smut, magic, twists and turns. Some lines stopped abruptly and would have been nice to know the end or just a more clean finish, but all in all a very good story that draws you in. Thank you Author!
Knight My Lady
Fantasy · LucyXiong