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I like your story but you alter the power levels a lot, at first it was kind of understandable but now the MC is just pathetic, I'm not saying you made him op or anything but you still weakened him too much. There wouldn't be so many similar comments if the templates were from different characters, however it is your story and I respect that. (Sorry for the spelling, a translator was used)

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But as far as I can remember, the author has already altered the canon too much to say he "follows the Canon like a lost puppy" just for a quest.

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Well, that makes sense in my opinion, those details have a big influence on the combat, besides that he is already able to do things that no one would do at the beginning (or so I think, I'm not very knowledgeable about danmachi, I only know the basics and necessary). PS: great story keep it up

I didn't criticize the story or anything, I just gave my opinion, the story is good, I just don't like Jessica's character in general but I never said that she was ugly or anything like that and I won't leave the story if Jessica ends up as a love interest and the author seems to have something prepared if we consider his comments from previous chapters. (I apologize again for any misspelling)

The story is good but seriously and I REALLY hope the love interest isn't Jessica, I've seen another comment say the same thing and the author told him to have some faith and I decided to have faith. (sorry if there are spelling mistakes and it's not to throw hate because the story seems interesting to me it's just that Jessica is bad in general) PS: thanks for the chapter

well... at least I win, embarrassingly but I win and that's already an improvement. PS: nice chapter

Actually, round 3 is still missing, the author mentions it in the note at the end and I must point out that if I remember correctly we have been training for almost a year when the brothers should have more, they are also at the South Pole and lava control is very dangerous when it's just a test PS: I also hope that Kai wins (I didn't mean to offend or anything)

Does anyone know any other teen wolf stories where the protagonist is not a dominated person who does everything he wants from the beginning?