Crazy_Lady_2805

2yr

Commented

Spoiler!! This plan will get cancelled in the story.

"Then let's meet together at the XXX Restaurant by 8 pm this Saturday then"

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Urban · Rashima_

Crazy_Lady_2805

2yr

Commented

We can use this part to add a misunderstanding, to make their relationship better.

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Urban · Rashima_

Crazy_Lady_2805

2yr

Commented

Here, I think we can add a few more sibling conversations in the coming plot of the story?? Anybody??

"That's fine, but you irritate me enough at home already, I don't think I will be able to take that normally at work." Ashley was deadly serious with her lines.

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Urban · Rashima_

Crazy_Lady_2805

2yr

Posted

Firstly, love to all. Keep loving keep sharing the book so it can grow... pls Genuine Review; Damien and Megan are not written into the typical shadow of business people but are at the very same time shown as humans. The characters are portrayed in a very different form as everyone other than Ashley has a lot, so quite a good story. I got a few spoilers from the author herself, hence I know all of this. BTW she has put effort into my last idea Criticism: The story is a little too fast running here and there and suddenly slows down a lot otherwise. I think that needs work, another point is that there should be side stories since so far we are only able to know the main characters. All the best Author!!