Webnovel Author: Mart_Ero - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Hello

This chapter contradicted itself in everything. How does the AI ​​have control over your brain but needs your permission to access your cell phone? Man, this episode is the most ridiculous thing I've seen this week. He contradicted himself in every dialogue of the conversation

I was thinking about why this story seemed familiar to me. And remember. I stopped reading it because the MC follows the same path as everyone's licking dog.

I will give my point of view so that you do not think that I have given my opinion for no reason. I find it boring because of the typical environment of which the MC is. Everyone is always poor who works like slaves and some impossible opportunities come to them for no reason. I mean, everyone who works as slaves has hate and darkness in them, a desire for revenge. So it is ridiculous that you put a variable (x) that appears and sends him to the past just because he supposedly wants revenge when everyone else wants the same thing. If you had put that in some kind of ending, when he is betrayed. Bring up this Variable and say. "You want power. You want revenge, destroy those who betrayed you. Come! Take my hand, and I will give you the power you desire." That would have been better. And in the end, this (Variable), He only did that to screw other entities

It's boring. The title promises something good, but the content does not meet expectations.

Continue reading and you will know everything. It's almost ending.

Yeah

Alright. I'll fix them later.

Do you want to do the work? Clearly my English is not good and I mostly use a translator to get the job done.

I was bored with this chapter, I really feel like it was just pointless filler.

Haha, calm down. This is just beginning. You will see true mastery in future chapters. This is necessary and will be explained later. I don't want to give spoilers

Something like that will be sealed for a while. It will not last long sealed, at most two chapters explaining the events outside. The development of the world and the beginning of dxd. Until Naruto breaks the seal

demoncruz

the translator makes his mistakes 😅. I only translate it from Spanish to English so that you are aware of my friend's work.

Here I came back, I was really, and I mean, I was really going to stop reading it. Until I saw about Celestial Sect. That made me think. What is really happening with this Novel. And look. 😂🤣, I think I'll stay here a little longer. Although I have an idea for you if you are willing to listen to write a future novel. Tell me if you are interested and I will send you my discord contact to discuss it.