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prat381

4 days ago

Posted

100 chapters in and it isn't looking good characters aren't introduced properly and then they aren't explore properly and yeah it is too much to ask for this in 100 chapters but atleast it should be done about the mcs and the relationship of mcs doesn't have that much depth and the siris arc was stupid I mean why did even the vp wanted her captured and it could have done in different way too and the reason ceal wanted to kill her was stupid

The Extra's Advent: My Villainess Fiancée is a Yandere

Fantasy · Veilwriter0

prat381

2 months ago

Commented

these words really don't suit his character ugh if this keep happening I might drop except if the story improve

'Goodness gracious… Now I'm being misunderstood. What's with girls and jumping to conclusions?'

Eternal Freedom's Ascension

Fantasy · FrozenShiva_01

prat381

2 months ago

Commented

is he not gonna train his affinity, shadows, cursed voice and ability

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Eternal Freedom's Ascension

Fantasy · FrozenShiva_01

prat381

2 months ago

Commented

ugh just stop using this words and the other ones

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Eternal Freedom's Ascension

Fantasy · FrozenShiva_01

prat381

2 months ago

Commented

I don't really understand why authors go this route I mean something unbelievable happens to the characters and then they start thinking 'oh it must be my imagination' just why do they do this

'Perhaps it's just my imagination…'