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Great, novel. Although the start is a little rough it gets better once Aiden start exploring dungeons

Seems like a great novel , but the grammar is horrible and makes it unreadable

Don’t read this garbage. I have gotten to chapter 90, and it’s getting worse for each chapter. The MC is the biggest looser I have ever read. He wants to follow the ‘original’ story whatever the cost, which includes cucking himself by trying to ship his Girlfriend with the ‘MC’. The story is fine in the beginning, but turns into mess with no plot whatsover. The MC have second to none character development. There are multiple times where he gets the dillema of doing the right thing for himself and doing the plot for no FUCKING reason! And he always does the wrong action. The MC is the most passive, Beta male extra in existence. And kills inocent kids just to make the other characters follow the plot.

(I am currently on chapter 10) The beginning is fine and the MC seems like your average reincarnator, but he does express himself more and his choices seem natural Grammar seems good to btw. But suddenly we get other characters POV. And there seems like it have 3 extra MC’s including the original mc, we have one reincarnator and one similar to the «Parallel Memory» MC (He basically knows the future because he read the book in another life?) Overall the plot seems very interesting and unique and the world builing is alright. I just hope the Author doesn’t focus too much on the other »MC’s» the book has a great start and I belive it could turn out well.