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Mediocre at best. It could improved though. The author completely butched the origianl series's character. Let's look at one example I made: You know Tess's father? The king of the elf race? The first interaction he had with the Mc is a no-homo joke. Wtf? This guy is supposed to be same character I remembered? Arthur, the original main character is butched too. He can't even be called aurthur anymore with the way he speaks. The gammar is so-so. Not that good. Anyways, I'll come back to take a look at this novel once in a while. I'll tell you if it improve. And please don't be too discouraged by my comments, author.

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He's kinda a hypocrite, isn't he? Didn't he criticized Nobara for leaving without a word? He's doing the same thing to his friend, Usagi. Heck, this is arguably worst. By not telling them that he's alive, he's causing them a lot of suffering. Guilt that would haunt the two students in question for a long time.

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Oh god no...please no...Don't mix bleach into jujutsu kaisen! I am begging you!

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Kenjaku?

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He doesn't know the ending of Melina, does he?

Drawing upon his inner resolve, he reminded himself of the countless hours he had invested in mastering the game, painstakingly exploring its every nook and cranny. While his knowledge was limited to the starting area, it still served as an advantage he possessed over the vast and treacherous world that awaited him.

Git Gud Or Die Trying (hiatus)

Git Gud Or Die Trying (hiatus)

Video Games · Wicked132

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It melts your C*@$ off, that's what it does.

Straddling Izuku's thighs the moment Tsuyu cleared a space for her, Mina looked down at him with her characteristically impish grin, revealing, "We all have Ultimate Sex Moves, by the way. Mine is called Acid Vortex. Care to guess what it entails...?"

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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Won't that lube be...Acidic? It's all fun and games till your lil bro start melting...

Meeting Mina's gaze, Izuku firmly asserted, "Don't think I don't know why you wanted to delay things until now, Mina...either you've already had sex before, or you ended up tearing your hymen while masturbating. Either way, it doesn't change the way I feel about you. Rather, with your Quirk allowing you to produce lube from virtually 'anywhere,' I've been looking forward to having sex with you for a long time..."

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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But that's Vongola the first's name...

"Giotto... To be honest, I don't want to see this end."

Vongola Primo in One Piece

Vongola Primo in One Piece

Anime & Comics · nyawdao2

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That's just playing dirty...atleast give the others a chance at getting the spray without getting arrested for it.

Following her words, Komori half-turned away, revealing that the spray bottle was, in fact, within her skirt as she reached beneath it to pull out a tiny container of clear liquid, holding it up as she said, "This is what you're looking for. I'll give it to you if you do me a little service first..."

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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