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It kind of makes sense that Kyle is this strong. Let's take Captain America as an example, he has at least 10 tons of lifting power because a helicopter stopped in the 2nd movie. And normal bullets shouldn't hurt Captain America too much. The reason for avoiding normal bullets is that they leave small wounds that hurt and make it difficult to focus in battle. For example, in the Battle of New York, Captain America was able to resist the energy attacks with his own body, and then his wound healed for a few minutes. This shows that he has a low level healing factor. Captain America is a character who has the power and potential to defeat a small country as long as he has enough equipment in World War II, where technology is not very developed. Now Kyle is 1.5-2 times stronger than Captain America, he has both a healing factor and a Venom symbiote. So Kyle can infiltrate Japan, kill the emperor, and even create turmoil in the country and weaken the power of the country, but he cannot defeat Japan alone. because 1000-10000 heavily armed people can easily kill Kyle. All it takes is a few human bombs to get close to Kyle and boom, the symbiote will be disabled and Kyle will be seriously injured. Even with the healing factor, as long as the other soldiers are not stupid, kyle will be finished. (translated)

It's not that terrible of an ending, but it's not a very good ending, it's an average ending. I think the story was very rushed. I think the biggest problem with your stories is all of them. After a while, things like quickly becoming too strong and accordingly too many plot errors in the story happen. I think it would be better for your fiction if you make character development slowly in your future fiction. thank you for writing this fic

Super Boy Prime isn't that strong of a character, he just has author support, which is why he's so strong. It's not as strong on empty hand, but it also has author support. Empty Hand should be a newly released character and should be easily killed by Elaine, but it is a character that has been given a lot of boost by the author. I remember in the comics, Empty Hand says he defeated Darkseid, but he couldn't kill him. cos Superman is the strongest type of Superman. And here it is supposed to be cos superman instead of superboy. Only cos Superman has the strength to participate in battles on this scale.

Thank you author for the chapter. First of all, this fic looks like it will be a harem and I want it to be a harem. If there is to be a harem, I would like to see at least Yasaka and Rossweise in the harem. You can replace Mikasa in the harem. I didn't like Mikasa in this fic at all. (translated)

The first 100 chapters of the fic were good, but it started to get boring towards the end. First of all, I don't understand what the author is and your obsession with Gwen. Okay, Gwen is a good female character, there's nothing bad about that. Author, you want your MC to have a relationship with 3 Gwens in total. I understand the 1st and 2nd, but with the 3rd I'm starting to think you're totally obsessed with Gwen. I understand that you like Gwen, but this is a bit of an exaggeration. I like Gwen too, but MJ and Felicia are on the same level. In my opinion, they are not much different from them. Everyone who reads the comics knows that Gwen cheated on Peter with Norman and had 2 children with him, and that those children killed Peter. I remember the Marvel writers fixed this recently, but I'm not sure. Secondly, author, you write too many dominant and sadistic lemons. It was nice to read at first, but towards the end it started to bore me because there were so many scenes like this. Add some variety. Lastly, the author explores very little of the other Worlds. We discovered 4-5 worlds in the first 100 chapters and I enjoyed reading it, but in the chapters after that, we discover very few worlds and this gets boring. I understand that you want to write the background of the first worlds you discover and the interactions between characters. But you focus so much on those worlds. Let's explore some new worlds, there are at least 30 worlds we haven't discovered. Anyway, the author said, overall, the fic is well written. Thanks for the chapter and this comment has been translated

If Eren doesn't get together with Kuroka, I will quit the story. Here, Kuroka is the one who deserves to have a relationship with Eren the most. Neither her lover/killer in her past life nor her girlfriends in her new life. I never liked Mikasa, both while watching AOT and reading this fic. In my opinion, harem is the best option in this fic. Anyway, writer, you are cooking well, keep writing like this. nice chapter (translated)

For a new writer, you're doing very well. Don't underestimate yourself. As someone who has read all kinds of nonsense, this fic is among the top ones I've read.

There are a few parts of the story that I didn't like. Gilgamesh or MC is too tame in my opinion. Gilgamesh, as far as I know, is an arrogant and proud character. He doesn't accept everyone that easily. You have to make him accept you. For example, Enkidu proved himself to Gilgamesh with his strength and became a friend, and this was not an easy process. But in this fic, he quickly became friends with the Ancient One, and his relationship with both robots progressed very quickly, and he started to treat them as if they were his closest subordinates. It hasn't even been two days since robots appeared. I never saw Gilgamesh's arrogance in the fic, you didn't even write his iconic word. MC doesn't look like Gilgamesh at all and I understand why you are write that. MC is an OC character who uses Gilgamesh's body, but is he not affected by the other soul in the body?. Anyway, I liked the story in general. I'm waiting for some chapters to accumulate, then I will rate and comment accordingly. If you want writer ideas, you should take a look at Marvel comics, there are a ton of topics there, and I think it would be more fun if you write the fic according to the comics, not just the movies. In the comics, the characters are stronger than in the movies, for example, Thanos could destroy the planet with his fists in the comics, and I think the fight between such a Thanos and MC would be very exciting. If you still can't find an idea, you can include the story of the Fantastic 4. and I would prefer you not introduce concepts like the grail war into the story too early. Marvel already has comics with a ton of plots. thank you for chapter (translated via Google Translate)