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I didn't like this fan fic when I first read it. It didn't give me a Game of Thrones vibe. MC was a bit naive and optimistic in my opinion, but now I'm enjoying reading this fic in the last chapters. People complain about drama but this is Westeros. Without drama, this fic wouldn't be a Game of Thrones fic. thanks for the episode

I loved the development of the story. It's realistic and there's something I want to say. Come on, this is a magical medieval world, political marriages are a normal thing in that world. You should have expected this before starting this story. It's the right decision both pragmatically and emotionally. Put yourself in MC's place and do you think you have the will to sit on that throne with the blood of millions of people on your hands. you will be broken. I don't understand people, you can't criticize a good fic so much just because you don't like Harem. I understand if you don't like the fic at first, but don't make bad comments just because it has a Harem. I love reading Harem fics and I also read non-Harem ones if they have a good story. But I wouldn't make a bad comment just because there is no Harem. I would like to thank the author. Don't pay too much attention to other people. This incident seemed very realistic and logical to me.

Boyfriends in the ntr world are always stupid. So the main character is not at fault here, he tried to help.

I'm glad I could help. In recent fanfictions, relationships move very quickly and they quickly end their relationships with just a few implausible events. This also seems less realistic to me, and this is true of both harem and non-harem genres. I read both genres (I read Harem mostly). And they both have well-written relationships, but there are also poorly written ones. The last fanfiction I read that has a nice relationship is Meta Essence Gacha and that fanfiction has a harem. The relationships in this fic make a lot of sense and are well written. I think it's a very well written fanfiction. I recommend you read it and you can get reference from there.(translated)

I just started reading comics. You're right, there are actually all kinds of versions of a character in comics. I just get a little annoyed when a character strays from their established personalities. Things like fling are not something that happens very often around me and I still haven't gotten used to such events. I'm from Central/West Asia and since my culture has not a little tolerance for such events, such events don't happen very often. In our culture, we always approach relationships seriously, so I found it a little strange. I read their fiction out of curiosity about the culture of foreign countries, and I couldn't get used to it because there were many things I found strange. I'm sorry if I disturbed you.(translated)

I liked the fiction. I loved the development of his personality. The story of him slowly developing a human emotion from an indifferent person was nice in terms of character development. I'd say it's very similar to MC Beyonder. Their personalities are just a little different. MC seems knowledgeable, indifferent, mature compared to Beyonder, and a character with an interest in the world. There is an idea in fiction that I can suggest. It's good that he gained emotions because of his body in the first place. I think it would be nonsense to say that he started to gain emotions because of kara. Changing your personality emotionally because of a girl you've known for 1-2 weeks is nothing but nonsense. Now I think it would be better if these feelings did not develop only with kara. It would be better for other characters to help develop emotions in MC, and I would prefer it to go slowly. If you just continue with Kara, MC will become a simp (slave) who is very emotionally attached to Kara at the end of the fiction. It is better not to see Kara, someone she has only known for 1-2 weeks, as a friend or not to try to save her. If you want to develop their relationship as the story progresses, you can, but right now their relationship is too shallow. Thank you for chapter(translated)

It kind of makes sense that Kyle is this strong. Let's take Captain America as an example, he has at least 10 tons of lifting power because a helicopter stopped in the 2nd movie. And normal bullets shouldn't hurt Captain America too much. The reason for avoiding normal bullets is that they leave small wounds that hurt and make it difficult to focus in battle. For example, in the Battle of New York, Captain America was able to resist the energy attacks with his own body, and then his wound healed for a few minutes. This shows that he has a low level healing factor. Captain America is a character who has the power and potential to defeat a small country as long as he has enough equipment in World War II, where technology is not very developed. Now Kyle is 1.5-2 times stronger than Captain America, he has both a healing factor and a Venom symbiote. So Kyle can infiltrate Japan, kill the emperor, and even create turmoil in the country and weaken the power of the country, but he cannot defeat Japan alone. because 1000-10000 heavily armed people can easily kill Kyle. All it takes is a few human bombs to get close to Kyle and boom, the symbiote will be disabled and Kyle will be seriously injured. Even with the healing factor, as long as the other soldiers are not stupid, kyle will be finished. (translated)

It's not that terrible of an ending, but it's not a very good ending, it's an average ending. I think the story was very rushed. I think the biggest problem with your stories is all of them. After a while, things like quickly becoming too strong and accordingly too many plot errors in the story happen. I think it would be better for your fiction if you make character development slowly in your future fiction. thank you for writing this fic