I'm done
ch 34 A Place To Eat At The Academy.
Fantasy · Jeffson
if only we got an explanation from this moron author
Ethan was still standing on that spot with Aiden when one of the nobles close to him began jumping up in joy, he was really elated. And why was he elated? 'Cause his daughter got to awaken an ability, she just came out of the temple. She awakened the earth ability, meaning she was an A-rank bender currently and future F-rank bender.
Fantasy · Jeffson
could never agree more
..Once again, imagine if their house was really far from the temple.
Fantasy · Jeffson
agreed
-Function: This is just like an extra when it comes to healing your injuries. Apart from the healing skill, this is also available. So if you choose not to activate the healing skill to heal your injuries, you can drink this potion.
Fantasy · Jeffson
i have no idea what ur saying, but u sound angry
ch 0 9 The Chase.
Fantasy · Jeffson
true
That's a decision everyone has to make, you choose whether you want to become a warrior or not...and most of the high-ranked chiefs chose not to. And that's where Ethan had the advantage.
Fantasy · Jeffson
if he chooses this I will straight up leave
Harem god? Now, this sounds new to Aiden's ears.
Fantasy · Jeffson
Honestly, this is a pretty good concept. Well done author.
"I'm the god of the apocalypse. If you choose me, you're choosing the path to be reborn into a post-apocalyptic world, a world that has undergone annihilation. And you'll be the chosen one, the one that must bring an end to the apocalypse". The old man responded.
Fantasy · Jeffson
why did this guy become poetic all of a sudden. did death give him some new Shakespearen enlightenment?
"I'm Aiden by name, what of you, what is your name?". Aiden responded throwing back the question.
Fantasy · Jeffson
literally no one said anything about the paragraph lengths
ch 0 1 One Shot...And It Was Over.
Fantasy · Jeffson
you're repeating yourself
This was the type of death Aiden was running from, 'A shot in the face'. Since each of them had gone through some shits in their lives, since each of them had been bullied, they felt they shouldn't care about anything. They were willing to do anything just to survive not caring who it would affect...as far as it would bring in cash.
Fantasy · Jeffson
your writing is so informal, then you throw in a word like "fraternity"
'The Viper' was made up of a group of young lads that felt like the world was unfair. Each of them has gone through some shits in their lives. Each of them has been bullied, almost all of them didn't get to experience the love of a parent. So that's what prompted the fraternity.
Fantasy · Jeffson
why would the boss leader text him at all? I would assume he'd just kidnap him and then tell him why, but to text him? he's the leader of an entire mob and he didn't think that the mc would run away? 🤣
'Today is gonna be your end. Remember our rule, you f**k up, you dare snitch on us, you don't conform to the mission given to you, you dare betray us. You gonna die, you gonna get shot in the face...just one bullet to the face'.
Fantasy · Jeffson
what is wrong with u
without reading much? I read 30 chapters, and from what I can see, that is more rhan enough to make a review on it. On the other hand, you seem to have the delusion that your novel is holier than thou. Look at the amount of fans u have. look at how many golden tickets you have. look at how many powerstones you have. I didn't trash on your novel because I like it. I trashed on it because the common consensus is that its bad and most people have dropped it by chapter 30.
Reincarnated With The Undefeated System
Fantasy · Jeffson