I hope to see more character Progression as the story goes on but other than that , this story is pretty good for your first try keep up the good work
Fantasy · Hidden_Paragon
I love the way this story played out and I hope you continue writing such masterpieces............................... ... ..... ...... .......
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I hope to see more character Progression as the story goes on but other than that , this story is pretty good for your first try keep up the good work
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Fantasy · Hidden_Paragon