thanks for the mass release, I can't wait for the next chapter
ch 555 The Plan has Changed!
Fantasy · Wahi
how old are the siblings. I kinda forgot
ch 0 7 Shopping | New Home
Fantasy · Yue_021
I think you ment reborn 9 days before... you forgot writing days
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Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
this paragraph is also repeated
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Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
ehh you already wrote it in the previous paragraph
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Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
who doesn't enjoy a cold helpless shower. I would welcome it every morning.
"Helpless," she muttered as Elior finished brewing the tea. He opened the slid as a refreshing aroma drifted towards her nostrils. Really, what does he miss? Inari was never a tea person, but when offered, she did not decline. At least, it would be better than that weird drink he acclaimed as an energy drink.
Fantasy · silent_walker
really impressesive is that not be ause he only saw 2 before from his mother and from this women from his previous life
It is literally the most beautiful pussy she has ever seen in his life!
Fantasy · Eroos
Happy Birthday to you Happy Birthday to you Happy Birthday dear Eros happy Birthday to you. Sto lat sto lat niech żyje żyje nam jeszcze raz jeszcze raz niech żyje żyje nam Niech żyje nam Zim Geburtstag viel Glück zum Geburtstag viel Glück zum Geburtstag lieber Eros zum Geburtstag viel Glück In all languages I know the lyrics for songs which wish a happy Birthday
ch 121 Notice (This is not a chapter)
Fantasy · Eroos
I'm reading this chapter in polish school
ch 119 Emotional conflict
Fantasy · Eroos
If you(author) want to make a romance subplot can the lover of the MC not be Lisa. This would be to predictable, and boring maybe in the future you can introduce another originally side character and her can be the lover, or you introduce a girl which hadn't shown up in the original story, or he meets a girl which showed up, and is as talented as Hiro or even as the MC(meaning she has a 9 star art) but our MC got transported in the novel before this character could develop
ch 33 Invitation
Fantasy · SomDxD
as far as I understood this chapter is that the babysitter betrayed Christian which lead to an attack, Christian figured it before out and spoke in a code with the 911 operator. Then Christian killed all the assaulters and then the police officers shot him
ch 87 Monster (Unedited and uncorrected chapter)
Fantasy · Eroos
well this phone call even fooled me
ch 87 Monster (Unedited and uncorrected chapter)
Fantasy · Eroos
i think you forgot to translate the Tia to aunty
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Fantasy · Eroos
no i just thought that it was funny how he asked where he was and below it was answered as Discord in sense he is at Discord maybe I am a bit weird and how some strange sense of humor
ch 0 2 Where the hell am I? (Edited)
Fantasy · PhantomMedjay
sorry for the typo
"I live alone with mom and my little brothers, I don't worry much about clothes" Sitting down on the bed, Christian looked curiously at the excited woman.
Fantasy · Eroos
i think o stead of brothers you should write so lings because he has both a sister and brother
"I live alone with mom and my little brothers, I don't worry much about clothes" Sitting down on the bed, Christian looked curiously at the excited woman.
Fantasy · Eroos
I think you mean bRought if this r is missing you write the past tense of buy and I don't think you mean that
He immediately bought some as if waiting for that command
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
I don't understand why Nero and the others didn't recognize Leo, weren't they still inside the Room when the Mask broke? If so why didn't they recognize him?
ch 359 Death Incarnate [2]
I Will Kill The Author
Fantasy · Night_Crawler619