Stevo_Ballou - Profile

why oh why do u have to explain things over n over, get on with the story

still so much over explaining and going over things over and over, focus more on the story to, yes details are important but not when they are explained continually n takes whole chapters just for that. I want the story, what comes next. try to tone it down and mix the details in with the pace of the story. try not to repeat to much. this could ve of easily been near the top of my favorites. I read alot..... alot lol. sometimes several books at once n some. stop the repetition so much n this would be epic mYbe more epic then others I have read. Bout to give up on reading this cause of the waste of chapters, my time n money.

again going over the same details that were already explained previously, a whole chapter wasted. my money going down the drain for this book

A lil to much details explained over and over, sometimes wanna be like just continue the story, whole chapters explaining the same thing over n over is not that great. Otherwise love the story

this is kinda sad, like a slap to face for the reader ands fans of this novel, so much potential. Really a good read but destroyed by the ending. To sad

ditto

I need more of this story, don't stop yo. wish I had more of a option to put more money towards this but sucks to be broke

I need more lol, great story really