Mario_Forenzeim - Profile

Hahaha, I just realized that there is a hunt for me on your server. I think it would be much funnier if I don't reveal myself and let you guys go at it. Good luck, and cheers!

Oh, I understand that it's hard to pace things, but good luck with it nonetheless. By the way, I'm also on your server already haha.

It's a pretty good novel so far about two girls exploring a world that is pretty much unknown to them. This world is slowly unraveled over time as the story progresses, and tidbits of lore continue to get added upon from the initial exposition. It's something that goes along with the premise of the story, and it's built on it quite nicely. The characters are quite memorable, especially the main ones and their backgrounds. Heck, the origins of this world (which is aligned with them) is quite unique, and I've never read anything like it. It's not perfect, of course. Don't expect this novel to be a masterpiece with no tropes, and let's agree, there is no such thing. There are also some issues of slow pacing, especially around the part where one of the main characters enters an academy, but that may be just to hammer in the details of the part. It was actually quick before this, time-skipping for some time in just a few chapters. There are also some characters that aren't expanded upon much (yet, I think), and I hope they are explored more down the line. In any case, don't let these stop you from reading it. It's still quite a good one to spend some time on to enjoy. In summary, if you want a medieval fantasy novel with a world that is being explored as the story progresses, with unforgettable main protagonists that share origins with the said world, as well as unique ideas interconnected with each other, then this might be for you. It's not a long read as it currently is, but it has great potential. Looking forward to read more chapters!