Dream to create a world to reincarnate in. Discord: H2Oz_Anxious#2334
2022-01-31 Joined India
I understand the easy fix part, but itās about more than just not having readers. Even I know this novel has a lot of potential, thatās mostly the main reason Iām afraid that Iāll ruin it beyond just having grammatical mistakes. Writing multiple novels at a time isnāt really a problem either. My first one was and is still something I cherish immensely, same with my other novels. And Iāve chosen to focus on one many times as well. When I started this novel, I was focusing on this one, while when I started my latest one, I was focusing on that one. I can do all of them together, but it would make the time I can give each of them significantly less. Wellā¦ A lot of it is just excuses, but I will look into the grammar. The circumstances prevents me from doing a lot that I can, but explaining myself will not really matter much. I can only hope you continue, but it is really up to you. Iāll do what I can nowā¦ (Thanks for reading. And these words.)
ch 847 An exhausted morning
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
ā¦I know Iām losing a lot, and I want to work on it as well. I should stop making excuses. Iāll start today. Letās see how far I can go this time. (Thanks for reading...)
All the powers from all over the woerld would want a p[iece of the absolute empire and since they all would soon know my connection with the thieves that they all cololectively hate, they would most certainly choose the other side than us.
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
Genuinely, effect of writing multiple novels. (Am not changing many things at this point, I have to start writing this one first.)
Rein didn't say anything about this either even though they looked at her for her opinion on this matter.
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
ch 0 2 1: New Origin
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
I know thatā¦ and Iāll try correcting what I can, but the main problem with me regarding this particular issue is the time I can allocate to this work. Itās not even about the language but the time I can give to the work because of all the other things going on with me. I can make it so that thereās no error or any typo in the entire chapter but because of the lack of time and motivation to spend more effort on a work that is being read not by many people, I do not go for it. I know itās sometimes, most of the times unbearable. But unless I get a response from the readers like this, I donāt go for correcting all the things. (I understand itās too much sometimes, and Iām to blame for that. I accept it, I kill a lot of my potential readers. But thereās little I want to do given the circumstances.) Iāll try to correct a few chapters after this one but I might not be able to do a lot, so I apologize in advance. (Thanks for readingā¦)
ch 847 An exhausted morning
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
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Her slender hands did not justify her strength. Her entire body which looked more natural rather than muscular did not justify just how stupidly strong she was either.
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
š„² In the future perhaps.
ch 889 Shared sensory experience
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
lol nitro where
ch 0 1 Retirement
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious
And yet you write better than me. š
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
Whyās even interested in anything at all?
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
It could use some workā¦ š„² Like, itās not that itās boring, itās meaningless. Thereās no point here, not even the thereās-no-point-to-this point that you tried to make.
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
āItās not like I would ever spare these hideous beasts.ā
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
Using He after calling it an It isnāt appropriate š
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
See, just like how you canāt show this in a FPP, you unconsciously know the whole interaction doesnāt have to be from his perspective.
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
By just changing the whole interaction into TPP, you can make it so much more impactful, you know? FPP is not really needed here. Try reading it back again yourself.
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Fantasy Ā· Hardy1j
Fixed. šāāļø
ch 846 Cure of mental pain
Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer
Fantasy Ā· H2Oz_Anxious