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is the mc an idiot when he got a tear of demonic priestess that can revert a demonkin to a human he should have used it on photos but no he is completely ignoring it and uriel also is not saying anything about it its like they both forgot about such an item

like I said the mc is just a retard , he was well over 20 years old with a degree so he should be able to show some maturity but no he is behaving like an idiotic child of age 10 like his body

Well I think it is your first tym writing a novel that's why you are portraying the mc as an idiot while he is well over 20 years old

but what is this with all writers making the maid of mc fall head over heels in love with mc like seriously grow up bro you are making it cringe and it's like Grayfia is a taperecorder she kept speaking I will protect you we will face it together repeatedly

this is the shiniest Novel I have read till date

I was enjoying reading till here but writer you just ruined the whole story till here you portrayed the mc as someone capable of mind games and intelligent but now you are portraying him as a fool who is led away by lucifer like a dog through his nose I am dropping this novel like seriously if mc wanted to leave earth then he should have asked khione who is a dragon and much more trustworthy instead of listening to the devil

Well I kind of think that the mc is stupid, his iq level is very low like a cow he hust goes with the crowd not understanding the situations like seriously his grandmother told him to enroll in Saint Claire academy that is in another city then why did he went to byrhendlr

Well whatever i just dropped it

seriously bro you need to work on your plot your mc is a half assed teenager that is a coward and does everything whether inhumane or bad without worrying about consequences at least he should have used this chance to do good instead of unnecessary player killing for level up I think instead of Randy , the mc should be dead

bloody cringe chapter mc is not behaving like a mc and storyline is lackluster

your novel sucks bad story writing

your writing doesn't make sense at all first learn how to write a proper sentence then star a novel

Well the chapter is good but clear my confusion why the heck a noble vampire just turn a sick human in to a vampire

I think the mc is stupid and has no brains and he is a coward who fears his own little sister I mean at least he is older so he should've adapted to that world by now but he is still behaving like a toddler

is the mc pretending to be dumb or is he just plain stupid?

well look at that our mc got a op system which rewarded the mc with sss pet nd sword but he is still a coward

please improve the character of mc he is behaving like a 4 year child every time system tell to do something the mc is ignoring its instructions to become strong like a rich snobbish brat

I am dropping this novel titles are shot that doesn't make any sense and the mc is like super weak not liking this novel

the mc is a total coward