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Thanks for the chapter
ch 10 Chapter 10: Secret Room
Marvel: Blacklight Reaper
Anime & Comics · PepengAgimat
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ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Discovering Identity
Marvel: Blacklight Reaper
Anime & Comics · PepengAgimat
First 2 chapters are actually good but in this chapter. There a lot of mistakes that I noticed, one of them is your grammars which js sometimes a bit off, I think.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Operation: Rebirth (Rewritten)
Marvel: Blacklight Reaper
Anime & Comics · PepengAgimat
Pretty good start, I like it.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Into the City
Marvel: Blacklight Reaper
Anime & Comics · PepengAgimat
Disculpa, gracias por señalarlo. Esta es la primera vez que escribo una fanfiction, así que todavía estoy aprendiendo.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Dance of Shadows
Crimson Gale: Kazuki Uzumaki's Destiny
Anime & Comics · FrankensteinZ
Fue demasiado forzado?
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Dance of Shadows
Crimson Gale: Kazuki Uzumaki's Destiny
Anime & Comics · FrankensteinZ
That's what I also noticed yesterday when I was re-reading it so no need to mention it to me haha. Don't worry I actually planned to rewrote that part when I have free time.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Veiled Shadows (Rewritten)
Crimson Gale: Kazuki Uzumaki's Destiny
Anime & Comics · FrankensteinZ
Thanks to you I now have a better understanding of the difference between Clone Technique and Shadow Clone Technique since I did some research myself. This is what I've come with, The Clone Technique, is a fundamental ninja technique taught at the Ninja Academy. It allows the user to create illusionary copies of themselves, typically created for deception or distraction purposes. As for Shadow Clone technique, it is a more advanced and more complex version of the Clone Technique. It creates physical and tangible clones of the user rather than just illusions. Correct me If I'm wrong and with that I may have to do some rewritting on some chapters thanks.
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Crimson Gale: Kazuki Uzumaki's Destiny
Anime & Comics · FrankensteinZ
oh yeah, I forgot their Japanese term. My bad, thank you for the correction.
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Crimson Gale: Kazuki Uzumaki's Destiny
Anime & Comics · FrankensteinZ
Yes, Otsutsuki will exist in this fanfic story at some point.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Reborn in Flames
Crimson Gale: Kazuki Uzumaki's Destiny
Anime & Comics · FrankensteinZ
ABD
"I will call it Dharmagan because it's like a dharma wheel which has eight strokes and is deeply connected to the eightfold path." I said
Naruto : The Demon Swordsman
Anime & Comics · Charizard6
i think this is a dumb move, considering that InoShikaCho is like a tradition. It's okay if it's only team 7 but naah..
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In Naruto With Minato Template
Anime & Comics · kamidemond
Karin for FL!! and for the summon, I'd like to see him use Kashin Koji's frog. 🤣
I'm out of work in an hour and I plan on writing 3 chapters tonight. 2 things I think I figured out who I want the female lead to be, and what his summon contract will be. to make this fun if you can guess the correct girl I'll write an extra chapter tonight. related unrelated how do you guys feel about dinosaurs?
Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment
Anime & Comics · Balthizar_Blake
Ignore them and just keep writing what you think is the best.
ch 23 Deleting this after a few hours
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
hear*
I could already here that guy shouting at his men to form a perimeter around me probably because he assumed whatever I was shot with had already taken effect.
MARVEL: RE-DO
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
Thanks for the Chapter
ch 11 Chapter 11: Viral Sonar
Marvel: Blacklight Reaper
Anime & Comics · PepengAgimat