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pokes in the eyes, spinning elbows and oblique kicks are a foolproof trick [img=recommend]

"Indeed, I trained him. And the only reason I'm going to continue to train him is that he allowed me to talk to All Might again..." replied the hero, glancing at Felix. "You got his attention for a reason still unknown to me, so know that I will help you get stronger. However, for that to happen, you have to win your matches in the MMA tournament; I could "see" that the competition will finally last only one night; you'll have to be quick."

My Hormonal Control Quirk

My Hormonal Control Quirk

Anime & Comics · Shinoerah

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kenichi generation*

Azuma stood there for a second, his thought actually being, [Fuck no, I will not teach the kid, he already has 5 masters and became fucking overpowered in two years, I will not add to that overpoweredness.] "Sorry love, I don't like to share, so if I ever get a disciple it will not be shared with anyone."

One Step at a Time.

One Step at a Time.

Anime & Comics · FluffiestEmperor

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The story would have been more interesting if he had not been the only one reincarnated, let him be another MC of the generation and then we are talking about a more interesting dynamic.

Azuma stood there for a second, his thought actually being, [Fuck no, I will not teach the kid, he already has 5 masters and became fucking overpowered in two years, I will not add to that overpoweredness.] "Sorry love, I don't like to share, so if I ever get a disciple it will not be shared with anyone."

One Step at a Time.

One Step at a Time.

Anime & Comics · FluffiestEmperor

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Well, having seen everything so far, there are a couple of considerations that I want to tell you. First of all, this is a great idea of what a creative fanfiction crossover should be and without exaggerating anything, even more so when it is accompanied with such creativity to develop the plot I applaud you for that this is currently the best Naruto fanfiction crossover on air that I have read, I just hope it stays on air, it is very difficult to keep up with the pace, I know that, I see that you are including even things that are not canon in Naruto, I just hope that does not overwhelm you, so far the transmigration novel of Kakashi was able to support the pace by including non-canon elements, but as you can see there were several chapters. The considerations that I would like to see are solving mysteries that the series or Kishimoto did not show, such as Hidan's god and things like that, it would be great if you invented something along the way, elements like the weapons of the sage, etc. I also see a lot that you are waiting for some things that Gege resolves, such as the complete domain expansion of the 10, shadows or the shadow of the tiger, which is the one that is missing, although I think you should take the risk anyway, it could give you an idea of the tiger's shadow abilities, such as it could revive the fallen Shikigami with certain conditions, the 10 shadows would become similar to the 6 paths of pain, which is great because Pain is one of the characters that I liked as a use a Kekkei Genkai as versatile as the rinnegan. and some ideas on how you could tame Mahoraga, think of the elephant that accumulates damage by falling or the ox that accumulates damage by traveling, why not make a giant rodent wheel or a highway for the ox to accumulate damage and deal one shot Mahoraga before he adapts like the elephant, I don't know why Megumi never thought of this, but it seems that you have the limitation that for every minute that passes the shadows deplete your chakra, those are inconveniences that you could solve, I just wanted to give you that idea.

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