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for villan mmc novel you can also take a little reference from i am such an expert why do i have to take disciple (eastern), villainous young master's otherworldly harem(urban), i transmigrated as a second generation villan(urban).

well i think you can read most generous master ever like how his treasure swords and techniques are famous and how his disciple is inherenting his legacy and either its a small world or big i think it doesn't matter without trademark technique or weapon its kinda boring it is more thrill when the protagonist has signature technique it can be temporary but i think its more fun with signature technique or a weapon you can change or upgrade than in future but i think a character needs a these things for a stable period of time

i think its a good novel and it can be one of the best with some improvements and i am looking forward to it.

i think protagonist needs a some special moves for his identity if you're going with popularity you should not just focus on his looks his name can be mentioned in the world with a specific technique, treasure or form like a trade mark which can show that this is the protagonist with expert or monster these words are very general words if its steady protagonist than ok but i think protagonist is popular than he needs a good battle record with signature technique or signature treasure sword or something otherwise it looks very so so.

and for manipulater protagonist you can read my senior brother is too steady, and for steady protagonist you can also read my girlfriend from turquoise pond

i think if you put a strong nature in protagonist of his own than it will make novel more fun like some protagonist strong nature of being steady, conquering or strong manipulater, and in my personal opinion i like an invincible protagonist so i don't like protagonist being manipulated by others or being helpless, and there should be limited trump cards if trump cards are unlimited than its no fun trump cards should be like trump cards 4 or 5 are i think enough and there use should be more detailed

i think the story is being very messy and in my opinion there are various strong aspects are missing in the story like no thrill no particular motivation like secretly cultivated for thausand years there is nothing for mc other than immortality and being invincible and there are so many lose ends and story just ends very soon and i think you can introduce more treasurers and you can also try showing sometimes how unintentional actions of mc impacts the whole plot i think you should read more novels for reference like martial peak its MC has a strong conquering nature, library of heaven's path in this MC's every work is out of common sense and comedic and many others

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these characters just keep grinning and grinning and grinning sometimes it just creeps me out

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