a 12 year old kid being allowed anywhere near guns? I highly doubt that
Amelthia waited outside the room like a good girl swinging her legs. She was getting bored as her dad was taking long so she stood up and started wandering around the floor. She went to different desks examining the things on it the torch's, the guns, the handcuffs and much more things. She walked back to the chairs and opened the door to the room slightly to see his dad holding on to the gun and pointing to chief's head. She widened her eyes and closed the door and stayed out.
Eastern · TanY
Why do people always pull out their IV?!
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Eastern · TanY
Idk, it feels a bit much to insert an IV for some bruised knees. It didn't feel like she was hurt. Or maybe she fell unconscious from blood loss and that's why she has an IV?
Amelthia blinks her eyes for a good second and moves her eyes around the room as her eyes take in the white ceiling and walls and the 2 chairs set around with a table and a flower vase in the center of the table, moving on the other side she sees machines and around and then she notices the IV attached to her hand, she thought
Eastern · TanY
Hello elements! This is the author. I hope you're enjoying my book. Seeing as this is my first serious attempt at writing a webnovel, I am very nervous and still have a lot to learn. Thus any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Here are some helpful things to my current social media pages, where I post some occasional stuff: Tumblr: https://darcyrose-here.tumblr.com/ (with a ton of tiny lore bits) Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100082620412235
Torrent of Shadows
Fantasy · Darcy Rose