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CosmicRuler

CosmicRuler

male LV 3

I Rule the Cosmos the world is only a speck of dust in my eyes for the galaxies bow before me

2022-02-01 Joined Global

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CosmicRuler
Replied to MaxRead

imma fix it

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The Guide of Evolution

The Guide of Evolution

Fantasy · CosmicRuler

CosmicRuler
Replied to MaxRead

my guy i thank you so much for this i guess righting so much zeros makes you forget basic math hehe

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The Guide of Evolution

The Guide of Evolution

Fantasy · CosmicRuler

CosmicRuler
Commented

Remove > (that he had taken the honey buns)

"Ah shit" Cam muttered knowing his time for pain was but a few feet away and scrambled to hide the evidence that he had taken the honey-buns, but it was too late as he was spotted. Tyrone stomped towards Cam till his chest was inches away from touching Cam's head and then Tyrone lifted him up and held him against the wall making sure the cockroach couldn't scurry off. "Hey man we can talk about this." Cam pleaded

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

Fantasy · NutritionWizard

CosmicRuler
Commented

Knowing his time for pain was (but a few feet away and scrambled to hide the evidence) < remove this and add this > (mere moments away he skittered across his sell like a rat to hide the evidence) add some humor to the thing

"Ah shit" Cam muttered knowing his time for pain was but a few feet away and scrambled to hide the evidence that he had taken the honey-buns, but it was too late as he was spotted. Tyrone stomped towards Cam till his chest was inches away from touching Cam's head and then Tyrone lifted him up and held him against the wall making sure the cockroach couldn't scurry off. "Hey man we can talk about this." Cam pleaded

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

Fantasy · NutritionWizard

CosmicRuler
Commented

But it wasn't long before cam and the other inmates heard the ( what can only be called the) < remove this its not nectary But it wasnt long before cam and the other inmates heard the (wrathful voice) < add this

But it wasn't long before Cam and the other inmates heard the what can only be called the wrath of a mad man who just got his food stolen " Who the fuck took my buns cause they bout to get beatin to the end of time n back."

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

Fantasy · NutritionWizard

CosmicRuler
Commented

Remove (the), from the part where you said he had stolen (the) Tyrone's honey bun

In the prison cafeteria Cam was enjoying what could or rather would be called his last meal, even though he wasn't on death row he had done something unforgivable, he had stolen the Tyrone's honey-buns, but he just couldn't help himself with the allure of the soft donutty texture mixed with cinnamon and finished with a glaze of icing, ah the thought gave Cam shivers.

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

The Twenty-Seventh Sin

Fantasy · NutritionWizard

CosmicRuler
CosmicRuler
CosmicRuler
CosmicRuler
Commented

bro has stamina of OVER 9000!!

In a place filled with magma and the aura of destruction, a teenager was having s*x with more than twenty thousand women looked up in the sky and a strange yet mysterious smile appeared on his face, but he shook his head and continued to thrust his hips. 

God's Era : An Error System

God's Era : An Error System

Fantasy · legendary_awesome

CosmicRuler
CosmicRuler
CosmicRuler
Commented

fix it NOW!!

Crossing thousands of moments in her mind. They burned every ounce of heart. Tears ran through her cheek.

Hours Of Darkness

Hours Of Darkness

Sci-fi · 002_Yuki_Onna

CosmicRuler
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a screen appeared over head witch said [GAME OVER]

"LUE!! RUN!!" someone screamed, as the sword went inside out. A letter in which it's written: "GAME OVER".

Hours Of Darkness

Hours Of Darkness

Sci-fi · 002_Yuki_Onna

CosmicRuler
Commented

as the sword pierced her chest

"LUE!! RUN!!" someone screamed, as the sword went inside out. A letter in which it's written: "GAME OVER".

Hours Of Darkness

Hours Of Darkness

Sci-fi · 002_Yuki_Onna

CosmicRuler
CosmicRuler
Commented

the entire things needs fixing but its good so far

Forcing her eyes to focus, she looked around, its raining, she took a step ahead and an arrow came straight marching towards her eye, she rolled the other side, and the arrow passed scratching her cheeks. She ran and ran and ran, her chest is in a storm and her mind a mess. Huffing, sweating, dashing into trees. The arrows keep coming. Ankle twisted, she rolled down, and her muscles react, not fast enough this time. The arrow skids across her right calf. It almost felt like her leg is on fire. Trying to remove herself from the horror.

Hours Of Darkness

Hours Of Darkness

Sci-fi · 002_Yuki_Onna

CosmicRuler
Commented

bro fix it

With eyes still groggy from sleep or whatever. She is feeling weak, she relies on all her other senses to comprehend where she is, but she has no idea. She gather all her strength in her arms and pushed the ground to stand up. She was wobbling, her eyesight was becoming more clear, and as she became more alert, it only takes a few seconds to work out why this is.

Hours Of Darkness

Hours Of Darkness

Sci-fi · 002_Yuki_Onna

CosmicRuler
Replied to TrashNovel337

yes remove it and use the one that i have

Butler John: "Young Master James your food ready to eat while knocking at the door."

Unknown Dimension (Gotta Rewrite due to bad quality)

Unknown Dimension (Gotta Rewrite due to bad quality)

Fantasy · TrashNovel337

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