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The story is progressing well as far as I've read. As someone who loved the author's previous book, I look forward to what will happen. As in your previous book, it is obvious that you care about world-building and I don't have a problem at the moment. There aren't many characters for now, but I like the people who appear. I hope you can write them like living people. And I know you can because I loved the characters in your previous book. If there are things I want to point out, I think you can make artificial intelligence talk less. He's a cute character, but the two of them talk a little too long sometimes. And I want the wars to be short but exciting. The battles in his previous book were good, but sometimes they could get too long. Personally, I loved it, but some people get bored. I guess that's it, I hope you tell the story you want to tell, as long as you write, I want to see the end of your stories.( Sorry for bad grammer)

Thanks for this book author. I like very much your book. And i hope you don't stop writing. And you mentioned about harem and i think one Fl is enough. But is your work and your choose. Don't let people affect your thoughts. Write the story you wanted to share. I also want to ask dou you any plan of increasing the daily updates to two. Not everyday but if you do it occasionally i would be appreciated. [img=update]

One fl is enough Mr. Author.