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This book is literal perfection....some parts could be longer and there could be a little bit more of non magic stuff and relationship stuff but other than that it's great

ha you did get your wish mc is now a boring psycho

yeah not much anything in terms of story only 10 pages of sun balls then droping gems in the harden and again fighting btw on the terms of fighting why was he so weak against level 5 when he was fighting in the tournament ( he was fighting them when he was standing his ground when he was level 3 not to mention level 5 and he is also a space mage, ssoul age,...that was just sh*t )

Can you explain what was the point of foreshadowing that the blond guy is his love interest for 150 ch? Btw the death of his parents was done so poorly and why did his whole personality change? He doesn't give a f*ck once through the whole novel about his parents ( problem with not establishing his relationship with them) and then they die and the whole theme of the book changes And fight scenes that last for 5 pages are sooooooooo BORING. And yeah all you started wwell nd they you f*cked it up completely.

it's really bad the i read only 30 pages because the author doesn't know what intelligence is. The mc has the intelligence 2, and i suppose the main girl jas an intelligece of about 40 ppoints yet he is always the ine coming up with olans and solutions.....oh yeah and a silly brut guy has also intelligence equal to 2....either way i would say the writing is just terrible One more advice for the writer, us readers can actually remember stuff that hapend in the previous chapter you don't have to write in every chapter that his points are worth duble Any way your writing is one of the worst one on this site, it's so bad actually that this is my first time writing a comment