jsjalchemy - Profile

Obviously as the author had pointed out, there are quite a few grammar mistakes and weird sentence structures to each chapter, however it's not so bad to the point where you can't understand what is happening in the story. There's not much to talk on, other than updates and some writing issues, I do hope more people can come to know this novel so the author will be motivated to release more content. It's a pretty nice read. I quite like the characters introduced. The interactions between Rai and Mark, it just seemed natural between friends. And when the author decides to do fixes, it will only get better. I'd like to talk about the system too, I'm not particularly into the genre so I don't know much, but I do like the aspect of having ratios and numerical values to determine how the system works as well as each character's capabilities within the world, for example, Rai's mana recovery rate. The content surrounding that is balanced so that even I, inept at Math, can still gauge the values and know what's good and what's bad. As for world-building, I find it intriguing that the planet may have been transported elsewhere, as I like huge background mysteries like that. Just seems very cool. As well as the gaming aspect of levelling up by hunting SO critters, meditation and such, I find that you were able to integrate these things into real life situations pretty well. Although the grammar mistakes are a slight turn off and make me scratch my head at times, it still gets the point across. TL;DR. It's good despite it's current flaws, imagine what it'll be like when it's edited out and with more content! Keep it up! Adding to coll :D