Instead of having the bracelets be connected to the dungeons, which is weird, make it so the government has legal control over the dungeons, and that people can sneak in or find newly spawned ones. There could also be rewards from the government for reporting these dungeons. All the 'dungeon levels' give you is government permission.
ch 0 6 Dimension of unknown type
LGBT+ · CeliaNaya
feels like his character completly changed from the begining. Feels a tad bit rushed, really good writing, and the story is pretty good as well. Just could use a little bit of thinking of the characters as people and not just roles to fill.
ch 68 First World: Twin Jade Pendants
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
I just want to be a guy. Epicanthus palpebralis. Ptosis is defined as a droopy upper eyelid. It's a very common condition among Asian individuals, and can be present at birth or acquired later in life due to muscle laxity or certain medical conditions that affect the eyelids and eye muscles. Give water and snacks to people on trail. Find snacks for Delivery Driver. Make Essay on all issues noted such as; the "Large Middle Class". Program Live Cloth Sim. Live Multiplayer House Building System, plants grow on it. I wish there was a animation class in school. Muslim and Christian Religious beliefs how they both are intended for good, its the people that do the bad things. Learn Japanese. Get Voice chat working on Computer. Make Rain World in Vr, Multiplayer. I will find a job I enjoy, and untill then I will study beacuse I enjoy learning, I shall improve myself. This is the gift thy parents he given me. If I want to live long need to make friends. Argument against Job; Most americans can barely survive off of their wage. When hiring people, you hired extremely low-level workers. If I want a chance at a happy life, with a good work-life balance, then a cashier job recommendation will not do. And if the purpose of that cashier job is to get me another low-paying job, than it isn't helpful in the slightest. If I don't want to become part of the 90% either laws will have to change, or I will have to make myself invaluable.
ch 12 Library Negotiating
Urban · SkyHighLimits
The current yen to usd rate is about 7.36 usd to 1000 yen. 7.50 is the US minimum wage(survival wage) and in all honesty its barely a survival wage. I suppose it depends on where you live though. If you want to have a job that doesn't involve you becoming a cog in a machine and being very underpaid, you have to go to college. But since that wage is so low, it's nigh impossible to afford a good college unless your family went to college. And even if you go to college it isn't a guarantee. In the old age, when a shoemaker made their shoe, the means of creation, the skill, and the shoe where theirs. Until they sold the shoe to others. Now that we sell our labor, not our work, we don't get paid the worth of the labor, we get paid what the boss decides.
No, wait. I'm in Japan, dummy. 1000 yen is equal to about 10 USD. Isn't that basically minimum wage in the US then?
Urban · SkyHighLimits
Maybe use religious community? I do enjoy large fancy words though.
ch 19 Healing the deep wounds of the MC! (Part 2)
LGBT+ · Take_the_Moon
ecclesiology should be whats here because I think ecclesiastical means to be a clergy or religous persona. Nevermind I just realized lol I was confused by the def on google.
In the novel Darkness Song, the MC has its hand "healed" or concerted by the power of the demon Marquis, but this does not make the MC happy or grateful to the Marquis, after all, the MC was whipped and expelled from the ecclesiastical community on account of this demon.
LGBT+ · Take_the_Moon
The story has good potential, but their are many spelling errors. Not to mention the sentences that seem to teleport around. "Plz" is not used during actual speech, and is spelled like please. I am enjoying the story, but the spelling errors are a bit much for me. Author, if you would like a proof reader/editor, reply.
ch 11 SO MESSED UP!
LGBT+ · CHArgergirl
Fantastic job translator!
ch 48 2.18 I Was So Afraid
LGBT+ · delanasiwarka
"all over the world, just to see, what happens next." the comma just after see is unnecessary.
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LGBT+ · cherlyswan
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Progression feels kind of unrealistic, you don't have to take to long, but a instant teleport misses out on some cool storybeats, like adaptation to a modern world. Instantly solving money problems also leads to less challenge, and make the story feel floaty. There is a lot of potential here, and despite some of these flaws I still enjoy it.
ch 12 Stealing a kiss
The Celestial Phoenix and His Guardian (BL)
LGBT+ · CeliaNaya