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hmmm. the sentence structure is slightly flawed. The word 'whether' is word used to connect other words or more commonly known as a conjunction. An example for the word: Mary was contemplating whether to go home or stay in school.
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Thanks for the chapter.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The New God of Teyvat
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ch 0 3 Chapter 3: The Reincarnation Of The Star
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ch 0 2 Chapter 2: The Star Meets The Moon
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yes Mr author. we believe in u. I want more..you want more.....we want more
(AN:Hi whiner here!, anyways I know I been saying this a lot but that development thing is so complicated to me because I don't know how to portray it so you MIGHT wanna drop this book if you think I'm gonna do a great job on that(news flash I'm not) and the other thing I want to say is that this chapter THAT YOUR going to read is MY way of them developing, this IS A CHAPTER of development, so as you can see or going to read, you may want to drop knowing I'm not gonna develop them well BUT FOR ME I AM DEVELOPING THEM WELL.)
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I think you're doing a great job so far. While there are a few mistakes regarding sentence structures and grammatical errors, you are still doing a good job none the less. Anyway thanks for the Chapter
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