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I hope this one does not end the same for the other story featuring star wars because it was very deisappointing despite having good idea. I hope that the MC in this one will have a character development and. I hope for this one to live to its potential but so far the story is good. Hope not to be a disappointment like the other one.

The protagonists are very childish like they don't grow up, it is very good in terms of updating but the story is disappointing. I've skipped a lot of chapters hoping to see the protagonist grow up but I'm fed up of the story. It is very disappointing, I thought they will grow up but instead it got worse. They can't even have a solid decision and pretty much acts like a child. It has potential at first but it was limited by the writer.

just a copy an paste of star wars, there is no development

it's not a good fanfic, the story goes nowhere

not to be rude but if i may ask. is this a translation?

i'm quite disappointed on how this goes, it has a potential but was ruined

i was laughing while reading it. thanks for the chapters, keep up the updates

mc is stupid in every decision he makes. story development is bad and events pop out kike mushroom, stopped reading it when he tells to jean he was reborn with his powers