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The plot is ragged and inconsistent (1 week for several chapters, then several years for 1 line). It is difficult to read this. The MC wanted to be a legend, and it ended up as a loser (ohoho, I killed Raikage, and he killed me and I made the biggest hole on the planet... seriously!? There are still Madara and Otsutsuki, man)). I do not understand this move. Just the author’s delusion. He could just use the call (what? so it was possible? ). In general, I am disappointed in the time spent, I will go read something to calm down))

It's a very stupid FF because MC writed all his knowledge about canon story in a book and then... (if are you here yet))) Orochimaru found this book **** **** **** **** **** ******* ***** I'd rather forget it.

I agree with you. But these books are for children, although they are still interesting to read. I would like to read a more elaborate version for a more adult audience.

I thought it was a translation from Chinese to English because in places it looks like this. The quality of the text, small chapters and the meaning of the text sometimes misleads me, as it happens when reading Google translations of short stories from Chinese. I searched a little on the Internet for this novel and did not find it in Chinese. But suspicions still remained. Someone calm my suspicions please)))

My ass in fire xD

I’m disappointed and I won’t read any more. It started out well. But... BUT... BUT YOU HAD TO INTRODUCE THAT STUPID SCHOOL STORYLINE. When Alfred told him, "Go to school dude or I’ll spank you". And the MC with a smile agrees with him after a little struggle (MS: "He wants what’s best for me, so I’m gonna do it like a fool". My thoughts and words are, "Let me have your opinion on my d*ck, I am the heir to a rich family. Whatever I want to do. If you cross me, I’ll fire you bastard!" But since Alfred is useful to me, then just tell him "NO!"). I have seen this move a million times, at least once MC went not this way, but no, they do it again and again! (at someone’s request do something that is not beneficial for them, when I can quietly send them away and do their business). It’s hard to just say NO? (lol, what? so it was possible?) No, just the authors can not think of another way (otherwise MC will not meet the right characters). I read a bunch of FF and novels and so on I’ve read a lot of FFs and novels and so on, so for me, this storyline trail looks really dumb and not interesting. Bye-bye.