Umbriel - Profile

When will she finally announce her presence as a divine spirit? If she showed her aura and authority it would be much easier to convince the ogres... and why is she still hiding it? Isn't she trying to create a religion?

Well... I'm glad it's not Shion as the romantic partner, but I would also prefer it to be Ramiris.

I would prefer it to be focused only on shinigamis, with the mc being the Soul King and having gotei 13 and division 0 and so on, now that it's mixing hollows and quincy it's going to become a mess...

I really don't see the appeal in these systems that screw up the mc...

As Gwen she already had a strength of around 20 tons, now with Cindy she gained much greater speed and agility in addition to organic web and retractable claws.

It would be interesting to see Naruto's adventures in his timeline.

I think it's an interesting idea... I've never seen a fanfic based on Danzou before!

You said in chapter 11 that the strongest human on earth would have around 25 STR, does this apply to other stats as well?

Mercer virus is from prototype? Look... I can't see the two Neos beating Alex Mercer in any way!

I agree that treating Monty Oum as if he were a god in fanfics is very cringe!

How to ruin a fanfic in 1 chapter...

The charm of this fanfic that caught my attention for so long was the fact that it was Momo as the mc, since I've never found one that was worth reading... Then it goes on hiatus and when it finally comes back it's being rewritten and turns Momo into a man... yeah... that's it for me!

With all due respect to the author, but that's not how critics work, everyone has the right to give negative feedback about something they don't like, except when they are being toxic, which is not the case here, telling people to keep their negative reviews to themselves because you didn't like 3 negative reviews in a chapter it's stupid. Aside from that the story is very good! as far as fanfics where Tsunade is the protagonist goes, this is the best!

There's no way Tsunade wouldn't know about such an important vote... unless she's trusting Hiruzen to inform her of things, which would be stupid of her... Furthermore, how did Orochimaru or the leaders of the Uzumaki and Senju clan, who are her family, not warn her?

Well... at least she didn't get shot again, and passed out AGAIN.

AUTHOR????? no no no no NO! MULTIVERSE NOOO...

One moment he is 16 years old, another time he is 15, another time he is 13 or 14....

Overlord RWBY Young Justice Gate: Jieitai Kano Chi nite, Kaku Tatakaeri

At the beginning of this ff she demonstrated that the system allows her to see information about other people including whether they are aggressive or friends... but since she was kidnapped by that girl and her group, due to the convenience of the script this ability disappeared... especially because if she used it she would see that the girl was not a friend.