Will_of_Thousands - Profile

I want to start off with this is a great work. it gets repetitive when the enemies became carbon copies of each other at different power levels. I honestly didn't have a problem with the plot until the author started doing this bs with this false arrogance based on power and experience he doesn't have. I've read to 2254 and I can't stand this bs. He gets upset when people underestimate him or kill the people close to him but heaven forbid he actually tries to prevent it by getting stronger before the problem happens. it's total bs that good flushed out characters who genuinely make the story interesting have to die for this dude to get off his ass. it's like the author gave up on creating interesting Villains and decided the mc needed to have a stick so far up his ass that he looks down on people who are perfectly capable of ripping him and everyone he cares about to shreds. all I'm gonna say is that if his girlfriend is truly dead then I'm dropping cause it's total BS. totally not needed and totally could have been avoided. hyped up the enemy, kills off his girl, then in the next paragraph Leonel wins with little to no fight because he's angry now and throwing a tantrum. like wtf happend to the calulatiave, funny, easy going, try hard who was unwilling to take a loss laying down. dude became a crybaby and an emotional wreck in the span of 300 chapters. for those that make it here sorry I ranted but I am just genuinely disappointed that such a solid story has taken this turn which you normally see in low quality novels.

it's back!!!!! ???????? I hope it starts up again consistently.

I have read to the current chapters, and this is an amazing book. the writing quality is top tier. the characters are great and very likable. although their is a harem, it is small and well thought out and not a focus of the story. * This only becomes an issue for me in the later more recent chapters* My only major gripe is that the MC is a punching bag for the world and everyone in it. Example A) MC gets a girl, but don't be happy because everyone and their mom want to kill him for it. Example B) MC wants to be happy and chill, but nah, he gotta stop some extraterrestrial dude who wants to blow up existence itself. Example C) MC wants to take a dump by himself, but nah, he gotta stop everything he's built from being annihilated. It gets to a point where I don't even care if he succeeds because I know in the next chapter or 2 he's going to be on deaths door once more and win for some bullshit reason or circumstance cause the MC's plans never work in the slightest and if they have any semblance of success it will only lead to more pain. So, in short, a punching bag. It didn't bother me until it became an every 5 or 6 chapter event. but to be fair, the comebacks are well written and are probably the only reason I'm still reading.

I have read to the current chapter as of now (chapter 9) and I am very impressed. The concept is solid and the characters are interesting so far. it's hard to give an in depth review when there are so little chapters but the book has great potential. my only side comment would be that the story can be vague at times. I can understand as it's just the beginning and is a formative period for the story as a whole but it would be nice if there was a little more detail. overall this is a very minor nitpick and can definitely change as the story progresses so take it with a grain of salt. it didn't stop me from reading all of the chapters in one sitting. very solid book I will be keeping an eye on.

if you haven't already, you should try out dimensional decent and rebirth of the nameless immortal god. both are 10/10 would recommend, especially if you like chaos heir.

40 chapter review: great story. as far as characters go I am very satisfied. The story could be more flushed out and detailed but overall it was a great story so far. It's unfortunate that the author dropped this. It was a great concept.