ali_havi

1yr

Posted

It's very cool story, but R-18 is not so much, as i want. Mc is small strange, but i like this. Moreover, i think you might to add some evil to your mc, because in some places it looks flat. Write more, thanks author!

Supremacy of the Beast King

Fantasy · _Evergreen

ali_havi

2yr

Replied to Snowmistys

Thank you! I didn't know. Your help will not be forgotten...

ch 115 Chapter 115: Use ahegao-picture to confuse onlookers

Devil Overlord - Overlord x DxD

Anime & Comics · SleepyAlfie

ali_havi

2yr

Commented

Only one? Have you problem in your RL(real life)? Are you sick? It's the kinda strange!

ch 115 Chapter 115: Use ahegao-picture to confuse onlookers

Devil Overlord - Overlord x DxD

Anime & Comics · SleepyAlfie

ali_havi

2yr

Commented

Will you make a chapter?

ch 114 Chapter 114: It doesn't work, activate plushie shield

Devil Overlord - Overlord x DxD

Anime & Comics · SleepyAlfie

ali_havi

2yr

Commented

Overlord is about evil! Therefore I don't like when you add romance or feelings. But I like love and feelings under pressure or coercion, because it adds atmosphere. The last 3 chapters are super cool.

ch 114 Chapter 114: It doesn't work, activate plushie shield

Devil Overlord - Overlord x DxD

Anime & Comics · SleepyAlfie

ali_havi

2yr

Commented

I don't understand how looks her HP. Can you help me?

ch 112 Chapter 112: The Praetorian Guard pulls a victim card

Devil Overlord - Overlord x DxD

Anime & Comics · SleepyAlfie

ali_havi

2yr

Commented

Do you want to make him kind? What for? Overlord is not about it! Why expose the main character as morally weak and short-sighted? After all, anyone can read Rossweisse's memories or just ask, because she does not keep her mouth shut. It would be better if there were more misunderstandings added, and not this romantic something.

ch 108 Chapter 108: Patch the stab-wound with sea salt