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Summers wolf who are they ?

Bro it's fine that you drop a few jokes here and there or that the main character drops a joke at some point but literally your novel is more meaningless jokes without grace with a bit of boxing I'm not saying it for disrespect or anything in fact your novel it has a good plot in these 3 chapters but the comic narration takes away all the seriousness of a boxing story it's as if suddenly rocky balboa is punching he stops and says some joke doesn't make any sense then for the good of the work and Of your work that I repeat once again I do not want to offend, I just try to enjoy your work because of how innovative it is and how fresh the boxing theme is.