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I liked it. Hit all the 'One Piece' motifs. Ended greatly as well, with plenty of 'twists'. An astonishingly tall order for most fanfics that this one managed to accomplish; and for that, you have my upmost respect, author. Well done!

Looking forward to some Harribel time! & Keep them chaps COMIN'! *My only minor complaint: As many before me have stated; Is the system. Why not just make it an inherent zanpakuto/hollow/genetic ability? Oh, and needs more Yoruichi! Can never have too much of that :P

It was good until the author decided to be cringe and make the MC edgy by introducing bullshit macgiffuns one after the other in an attempt to make the story more interesting. The injustice arc alone was barely palatable, and now he wants to introduce more edgy development in nearly the same exact fashion without pause or relief. I'm calling it quits here, but if you're into the more "dark" things, then have at it, sicko.

This is very nice if you're looking for a quick snack of a story! If you're not super into God of War, and don't mind skimming over some minor irregularities then its honestly not that bad. (At least, up to chapter 20, at the time of this review)

Please update! I desire more competent Kagua romance! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Yea, the latest chapter is new, thankfully. Hopefully it keeps coming

I have yet to find anything too errant in terms of plot of characters. I didn't really keep track of grammar, but it was good enough for me to not remember it being bad. My only gripe? Please update! 🥲