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Xiazuun

Xiazuun

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2022-02-28 Joined Global

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Xiazuun
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why couldn't adams.name be David

"Adam... When you fought Prime Stone Goliath you looked so cool, I wish I could be as strong as you someday." Felix said in embarrassment.

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy · Arlemit

Xiazuun
Commented

didn't he have 500 cuz he showed up first

Zeras signed looking at his points which has changed from 400 to 0.

Chaos Devourer System

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Xiazuun
Commented

I'm starting to wonder if he is the MCs Grandfather

"Is he really that powerful ?" The blond man gulped audibly, his throat suddenly feeling parched after hearing his prideful superior speak so. This was a man who firmly believed in the superiority of humans over Gifteds, yet he was now acknowledging the power of Zero.

Neurolink System in the Modern World

Neurolink System in the Modern World

Urban · InnocentFox

Xiazuun
Posted

It's a little different... The main premise is a guy in a modern world, with an rpg system, wants to be the strongest. This is basically this individuals story of how he gets there. Obviously not finished yet. The grammar, syntax, etc are all okay. Easy to read. Some things are repeated WAY to much. The worlds description and breakdown of the environments suck blue monkey balls, as in they are bad. For the most part the descriptions are not there. As of 99 chapters in, there is zero character growth... as in personality or what's makes the character. The rpg part obviously has really fast growth. The world really wasn't well thought out and doesn't really make sense. For example the way characters help others level but it supposedly takes forever to level up. IT DOES NOT AT ALL! Characters are going from 1 to 400 in like 4 months, wtf! The way organizations act towards other organizations and people is kind of bland. Honestly, just kill everyone, it seems to be ok. The MC is stupid, by that I mean borderline mentally handicapped. How do you want to be something all your life and at essentially 20 years old have ZERO knowledge on that topic. Zero knowledge of ANY enemies, they must still have the internet based off the setting. Increase the poor Mc's intelligence some. Have him make some non rpg growth. Skill acquisition is to crazy with no limitations, should have put some limit such as only being able to have a certain amount. At that point he can trade out for stronger ones etc. would have been better. A nice premise with similarities to other stories but give it a read and help the author improve. Story has potential but a rewrite would help.

Xiazuun
Commented

nerd

'Perfect! Now my real magic training begins!'

SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

Fantasy · Magecrafter

Xiazuun
Replied to Bladedsquirrel1

I almost dropped the story good thing I didn't

Shang continued down the street absentmindedly.

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Xiazuun
Replied to Coheed27

it's shang not alex

'Sure enough, I can easily support my own weight. This body is quite powerful and still pretty light. I don't want to admit it, but this body is probably even better suited for survival and combat than my old one.'

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Xiazuun
Replied to Ethglade

yes

One was a bulging sack, and the other was the black cube the God had given him.

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Xiazuun
Replied to Eclipse_Ranger

miraj in a mirage in the deserr

[A/N: I tweaked the spelling for Mirage a bit because later, there will be a desert arc. It will be very confusing when MC will talk about real mirages then.]

I Became The Pope, Now What?

I Became The Pope, Now What?

Fantasy · MisterImmortal

Xiazuun
Xiazuun
Xiazuun
Replied to Bernard_Serkist

I'm 5 foot 8

He rose swiftly from his seated position and stepped out of the capsule. Standing at a tall stature of 1.79 meters (5.88 feet), he had a slender frame yet it was clear that his muscles were well-developed from all the hard work he had done so far.

VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

Fantasy · Galanteo

Xiazuun
Commented

being fat

'This is such bullshit… what the hell did I even do to deserve this?'

First Demonic Dragon

First Demonic Dragon

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

Xiazuun
Commented

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"Hey, is it true that The White Fangs are challenging the boss today?" Arthur's ears perked up upon catching a fragment of conversation nearby. Intrigued, he listened intently, but the duos drifted away before he could glean any further information.

Level Up Legacy

Level Up Legacy

Fantasy · MellowGuy

Xiazuun
Xiazuun
Commented

how he did the interview ingame

The man let out a bitter laugh. "To be honest, you left right after you saved the girl, without leaving any information. We have tried everything to find you these past few days, to no avail. It wasn't until a local TV station aired a report that we learned you are a player of the Godslayer game. We got your contact information from the TV station."

Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

Fantasy · White_Ink

Xiazuun
Replied to Shadow_Mongrel

iIthink that was for equipment this is for skills etc

Grey(Poor) Talent, White(Common) Talent, Green(Uncommon) Talent, Blue(Rare) Talent, Purple(Epic) Talent, Orange(Legendary) Talent, and Gold(Divine) Talent.

Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

Fantasy · White_Ink

Xiazuun
Replied to Arrkein

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The Lower District had 30 areas. From 21 to 50. It housed the working class and the poor who lived from pay check to pay check. The population was 300 million.

The Earth After Rebirth

The Earth After Rebirth

Fantasy · Arrkein

Xiazuun
Replied to Follower_of_Abadom

I'm srry I had to

'That was why I invested almost all of my current money in the Trade Center...'

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Xiazuun
Replied to Arrkein

that what they want you to know

The Lower District had 30 areas. From 21 to 50. It housed the working class and the poor who lived from pay check to pay check. The population was 300 million.

The Earth After Rebirth

The Earth After Rebirth

Fantasy · Arrkein

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