Hitman23 - Profile

Summary: A very good novel, that I would highly recommend if you feel interested after seeing the novel tags. But, don't think this is an average r18 novel, since the plot and character development is top-notch , on par with some of the best novels I've read here. Writing Quality: 4.5 stars Pros: Easy to follow and understand. Grammar is good compared to other webnovels. Cons: Spelling mistakes are plenty, but it's understandable. Story development:5 stars Pros: the story started out as pure smut but evolves into a great story. I love the plot and really look forward to future chapters. Cons: There are a few minor plotholes, especially in the start. But, its manageable and doesn't break the story. Character design: 5 stars Pros: even the side characters are well fleshed out, and their history is explained with special chapters/interludes. The mc himself also goes through the "growth" arc and the author has tried to keep the growth organic. Cons: Mc sometimes feels hypocritical/conflicting. Sometimes the growth feels a little confusing, especially how he goes from "I've never killed someone" to "I'm a battle junkie" over the course of a few chapters. Perhaps fleshing out his thoughts during that time would've made the change less jarring for me. Updating stability: 4.5 stars 1 chapter per day, pretty standard. World background: 5 stars Pros: Pretty big world with lots of potential to be developed. Lots of interesting characters/plots to look forward to. Cons: Since it's so big, sometimes I forget who a character is. For cases like this the author puts an authors note at the chapter end which states which chapter the character last appeared in. Despite this, most of those characters haven't made a big enough impact yet for them to be remembered. Probably this will change as the plot moves forward.

Hi author, what's the update schedule? Webnovel currently says 31 chapters were uploaded in the past 14 days, so im a little curious