Gds_Gooddaysir

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Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Posted

it has alot of potential and the plot is pretty interesting. my only problem with it is how short the chapters are.

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Replied to Mrblack45

love the gif lol and ngl soild suggestion I already have an outline for the next few chapters but theres certainly a non zero percent chance I'll do something like that. Thanks for the suggestion man

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Replied to Mrblack45

I dont want to spoil what I have planned yet but yes your on the right track lol.

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Replied to Gds_Gooddaysir

oh thanks man I'm glad you enjoyed it

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Replied to Jonny_Mad

what does that mean?

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Replied to Gds_Gooddaysir

doesn't*

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
1 years ago
Replied to Mrblack45

he will at some point but only a very basic level, he does have the talent to learn any spell pasted D rank, runes are the same. also thank you, your the first person comment on my book I appreciate the support.

Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
Gds_Gooddaysir
2 years ago
Commented

I feel like bug means ability

  • Outcased original

    Outcased

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC SUPERPOWERS ABANDONED

    Meteors fell shaking the earth and on them came hordes of never before seen creatures, some good, some evil. With the meteors came the system, the system is a menu anyone at the age of 16+ can access. It tells you your level, age, knowledge, skills and talents as well as affinity. After losing most of its population the human race was almost entirely extinct but is making a comeback with there being a total population of about 2 billion. A few normal objects became known as items they got called this because they granted some type of special attributes like a strength increase or something similar. 2 years after the meteors fell they began to bring themselves closer together in small or large groups these are called ruins. Ruins regenerate mobs to protect the items inside, after some time the items regenerate as well. People gain skills, knowledge, abilities, by training and honing their skills and practice. People that explore ruins are called grinders. Earth is a big supercontinent known as the realm. There are 7 cites one for each race (besides the mechoids) and 1 for a mixed race city. The main weapons of this world are magic, small or medium guns, hand weapons( swords, spears etc) hand to hand, and bows.

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