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___________________________________________________________________ one of masterpiece story, i like world building and the plot especially, keep up author

It's quite funny how this has 4.6 stars because I'm 100% sure this AI generated chapters. The chapters are short, and here the author wants us to pay for Patreon to read this kind of small chapters. Is this author stupid or something?

"The writing quality is amazing, one of the best I've seen on this website. However, the stability of updates is disappointing, with only 60 chapters released in almost a year. The story development is lackluster and fails to engage the reader, making it a challenge to maintain interest. The main character is portrayed as exceedingly naive and uninteresting, especially in his interactions with the maester. Given that he watched Game of Thrones and was imprisoned for 10 years in his previous life, his naivety is surprisingly pronounced. Additionally, the world-building is severely lacking. The story does not explore beyond the locations presented in the original Game of Thrones books or show, which is a missed opportunity for depth and originality. I'm perplexed by the high reviews this story has received; it must be attributed solely to the writing quality.

Nope i just started reading this not so long ago

It's a futile endeavor. The tale involves a man reborn into the Game of Thrones universe, expected to possess ethical standards, yet he proves to be more despicable than the series' nobility. His presence fails to alter the course of events, rendering the plot nonsensical. My interest wanes as I struggle to appreciate such narratives

honestly this is one of the most dissapointing fan fiction _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Straight Garbage. Mc doesn’t even get one of his wishes which just makes this worse 🤮💩-----------------------------------------------------------

This story is frustrating because of a main character (MC) who has no emotions, but that's okay because he is smart. Error, error, incorrect. First, he kills Rain while he has a way to save her. I could understand if she were a zombie, but it gets worse as the story goes on. He just kills for absolutely no reason. 400 chapters later and he has not changed; he is still the same as the first day he was in the Resident Evil world.

This story is disappointing due to its unimaginative plot and uninspired character development. The narrative is plagued by repetitive themes and lacks the depth necessary to truly captivate. It falls short of providing a compelling or memorable reading experience. Additionally, the system used in the story seems like a lazy approach to writing, as if it's an attempt to easily profit from patrons

The various errors made by the authors please check or have some to proof read your work , in any case it still interesting -savannah was omitted when it should be yavannah

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The story takes a disappointing turn, especially in terms of the protagonist's decision-making. Despite being aware of the potential conflicts with the goddess and knowing that he could achieve god-like powers by extensively grinding in dungeons, he repeatedly misses out on these opportunities. This includes the chance to become the Shadow Monarch in the 'Solo Levelling' world. His failure to seize these moments for gaining power is a significant let-down. While the romance subplot is initially enjoyable, the story's excessive focus on romance detracts from the development of adventure and character, making it increasingly monotonous.

This story becomes a disappointment starting from Chapter 32. It seems like the author merely provided some basic plot details and let ChatGPT compose the entire chapter. I can tell because I've experimented with this approach myself, and the result here is strikingly similar. The chapters now lack life and fail to draw the reader into the story. Additionally, I'm frustrated by the author's decision to adhere closely to the main storyline, which makes the entire narrative feel unoriginal and dull.

he said the spelling and grammar will get better at HXH but that's a lie it still bad as hell.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

this copy and past but it has all the problem I have with this novel It's annoying how detached he is from his mother, and what's funny is a 4-year-old leaving his mother because of a sect problem. I know he's an adult in mind, but this still bs. I don't understand how this has a high rating; the MC feels like a fucking NPC Bot in his interactions. He has no emotion whatsoever, and you know he's in a body of a child. His brain is not developed, so he should have child tendencies.

this should not have a high score even it not a good or entreating story it just porn. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I want to see if the author is going to delete my review or not because I don't see anyone speaking about Rias acting like a loose chick. There is no way that every comment is positive

boring and not i do not enjoy the writing style its all over the place the mc become annoying over time :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

it's quite funny how you use Bots or alt account to get a high rating this one star will hopefully make things better [img=update] [img=update]