Moments 4
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I carefully surveyed my surroundings. The walls were a grimy, ashy, muted blue graffitied with curse words and scribbles I'd never seen before. The tiny square tiled floors were scuffed and and abused, the school janitors couldn't have mopped since months ago----and that's a rare occasion for the girl's bathroom. The stalls were also different; they were a navy blue the same color as walls, which was unlike the salmon pink of the girl's bathroom. In fact, everything was different, it was dirtier than the girls' bathroom ever was. And if the powerful stench of sweat and body spray was any indication, I should have known that by all accounts I was certainly not in the girl's bathroom.
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Teen · Youcancallmetrash
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Of all the things my Father could have done, giving up on me was first. He could have blamed me for her death----although, some days I know he should blame me for what I've done, but he didn't. He took care of me. That's why the only thing I can feel is grateful to my Father. In my heart, I know I should feel that way...but some days, something trickles in and poisons my mind; Some days, I wish he wasn't so preoccupied and caught up with work. Some days I wish he took more care of health. Some days I wish he took more days off for himself. Some days I wish he didn't have to work so hard for me. Some days I wish, well, some days I wish he came home earlier. Sat down with me for meals. Spoke to me.
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Teen · Youcancallmetrash
Due to the unusual usage of pronoun 'I' in here, I felt like this part is actually an annoying monologue of the actual mystery character/s of themselves. May I ask which of your character/s is/are literally talking/telling/narrating this part? Thank you.
ch 0 3 BLOOD SIGN
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Teen · Youcancallmetrash
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In our small town of Lakeland, Missouri, we have a total population that's just under 10,000 residents. My family moved here when I was 14, and I've been going to the same high school with most of the same people since middle school. People here work, marry, live, and die here. Mostly everyone knows the names and faces of complete strangers. That's probably why since middle school, I've known who Alex Trebek is, and the entire Trebeck family is. I've seen his name and face for years, and we've been in almost the same classes since 9th grade.
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Teen · Youcancallmetrash