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Review up to chapter 235 (MTL from wuxiax) . . . Spoilers . Inbound . . . While it may seem janky at first, with the powers of aloof Chinese protagonist Kokh, his harem system can really make him top of the world of pirates. It's actually revealed some time later that Kokh never had to be a pirate to initiate the system, he could have had a marine harem shim like that one fic on this site, sinful life something. Except the sex is less rampant. In this story, the crew aren't celibate but the fact isn't emphasized, just a few comments about relationship status here and there. Also, it's important to note that Im is a woman. Going thru faloo (the Chinese source site) table of contents, this is a complete story with just over 400 chapters with world travelling to Naruto after one piece is done. Because in the big three, you can't really get a large female only caste in bleach lol. Anyway, about power levels, it's estimated that, currently (ch 235) Kokh has his own power level 80k and with a cumulative 1.5 million from the crew. Compared to Im, she can apparently make a power up cloak with Uranus to get a total power level of 5-6 million but is a little scatterbrained. MC and she fights and presumably because Uranus usage is limited and she already learned MC can resurrection spam, they decide to truce for 10 years. Just in time for canon to start, so we can get more best girls without it being jailbait. Overall, the story never got dark or monotonous up to this point and it's really something you can casually read and enjoy with a laugh.

This is not a review for this novel on WN but the actual one. You can find 700 chapters of MTL on any of the MTL sites. This review is 150 chapters in and it's actually quite fun for a react! type story. What is a react type story? Well, it's where some dumb authors decided why not put these characters into a room suddenly and make them watch canon events for ROB amusement. That's it. Usually doing this would inevitably change canon but also reveal a ton of secrets. MC is a Kaguya Ootsutsuki expy in one piece world. By that I mean he's sealed inside the moon. He also has a super OP system that lets him gain power by subtly manipulating canon. Too little, and he gets to be stuck forever, too much and the world's will finds him and pops him like a zit. Now let's talk about the timeline and format. Timeline is when Luffy meets Sanji at the Barattie. The format is game show, where mc is the host and he invites one or more guests to answer some questions. With correct answers, his system provides rewards to the guests while it also protlvides the better version of the rewards to MC. System goal is to take over canon by subverting it, but it's not really limited. Mc can kidnap literally anyone from anywhere anytime. Questions span from past events and canon future. And usually MC provides clues in past shows and questions to answer each future question. Of course, if the guest doesn't answer, mc just reveals the answer at the end. So far, the contestants have been, whitebeard pirates, straw hat pirates, five elders, arlongn pirates, all of cocoyasi village, Nico Robin, Zephyr and Neo Marines, Trafalgar Law. The show basically reveals a bunch of secrets related to them to a world wide audiance.

Chapter 700+ review. This review should have spoilers because. I have read the MTL Read At Your Own Peril! So the One Piece arc ends near chapter 560 and MC starts over in Naruto world with similar rules. Since the manga one piece hasn't actually ended, the arc ends sort of anticlimactically with Imu dying to a random gunshot you could say. Suffice it to say Li Fan and students take over the world The golden lost just ends after a few more lists and there's even a fate apocrypha style holy grail war in the middle but what's to say other than Li Fan wins? He's basically a more active version of One Punch Man at this point. One interesting thing though: after everything MC does finally get a male disciple among all the beauties, not that it matters. Now in Naruto world, so far were still on the first list because these ninjas can't stop fighting. lots of Hiruzen and Danzo bashing, and the time period is a couple years after the nine tails attack. With in lore dead people being able to come back to life any time with forbidden jutsus, the golden list accommodates by broadcasting straight into the pure world or wherever they go. Basically all the dead powerhouses are ready for action through the list. The appeal of this fic is the same as always: seeing the reactions of everyone. But personally, ninja world feels too small after One Piece.

Minimal dialogue. Maximum horni. Take my 5 stars! Hakuna Matata! What a wonderful phrase Hakuna Matata! Ain't no passing craze It means no worries For the rest of your days It's our problem-free philosophy Hakuna Matata!

5 stars for effort lol. This is just straight copied from an MTL site. If it wasn't obvious. Hakuna Matata! What a wonderful phrase Hakuna Matata! Ain't no passing craze It means no worries For the rest of your days It's our problem-free philosophy Hakuna Matata!

This story is the epitome of self-indulgent, overpowered, wish fulfilment MC. In the original story it's all about discovery of the world of duluo dalu and how the MC who even has a head start but goes thru many hardships to reach the top. Now in fanfiction, you want something that explores the world lore more, something that makes the MC smarter than Tang San, or something that can get you enjoy the world without stress, all while providing an interesting take on the same story without distorting it too much. At the time of writing this, there are 25 chapters in WN and 62 on discord, but I'm on 36. What I've found is that this MC has a strong mind that diligently levels up all day every day, levels up his harem and extras, and is lucky enough that unreasonably strong characters didn't pop up and beat him down to prove a point or something. It's honestly really annoying when self insert characters who are strong and not psychos get beat up for no reason. Even if they get revenge later, the point is not to get beat up in the first place. Anyway good story, lots of face slapping, no lewds as of yet, 9/10.

This sounds like a mishmash of Arifureta and Monster Tamer light novels from the description... I'm very tempted.

I'm just guessing but I guess Muslims don't want their prophet to be even mentioned on this degenerate site but reads all the haram s.hit from here anyway lol

At the time of writing this: 1.4 million views / 35 reviews ... Seems legit.

I feel like this fic is more serving as a harem deconstruction, presenting a hot female character at first but then MC isn't able to get her first time (in story). There are very few ingredients in a typical satisfactory harem and Ein knows this like a master I'd like to think. You need the guy to be sincere, unparalleled in s.ex and you need the girl to have strong character but unexpectedly pure. Even if you know she has past relationships, you can hand wave that away by saying MC "conquered" her and even eternal s.luts ehem, "hedonists", will remain loyal for plot reasons. So from all the complains, it's easy to see that this was done to provoke a strong reaction from the readers and why would Ein do this? I don't know, maybe his enlightenment reached so high it overflowed into negative values. I'd like to hypothesize, that Ein adamantly claiming how this "isn't NTR" is another part of the grand keikaku* because NTR has such a loose definition even in Nippon land, I refuse to believe Ein is blind and can't see Mt Tai. (*Keikaku = plan) Just as example, if you go to the famous 6 digit website of hopes and dreams, and search NTR, you can find many of them there isn't any relationship involved between the pathetic guy to is NTRed and the heroine. There are some where MC is put in a situation where his dream girl is stolen right under his eyes before any form of confession. In conclusion, There is only one truth: this is meant to be a controversial fic which abuses the webnovel system and reader base mindset to be popular and infamous.