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Another idea would be making a powerful navy since you rarely saw any naval battles in both GOT and For Honor.

You could go the route of joining neither and simply being a powerful warlord with a immensely strong military that goes around fighting everyone whether that be the Dothraki or some random lords. I also haven’t seen anyone go the loyalist faction unless they are apart of the Targaryens but at the same time their king was mad so it’s understandable, if he does join the rebels it may be interesting if he takes the throne for himself although that would subvert like the entire plot of GOT.

Perhaps he could be a lord that opposes Daenerys and since he’s seeking a true challenge then perhaps he will look at he dragons as a worthy challenge and want to fight it. Another idea could be becoming a lord for hire, and since he’s already going to be remaking the black stone legion he will remake it and then in order to earn money other lords can hire him for his powerful military force. Sorry it’s not a lot as I don’t have in depth knowledge of GOT or For Honor although I do know that they both possess magic so there’s a possibility.

Definitly PG when those scenes are added it usually becomes to much and that’s what ends up attracting readers instead of the story. But at the end of the day it’s your story and that’s just my opinion.🙂

So far it’s been good but there’s a little to much repitition in this chapter, mentioning it once or twice is fine but anymore than that and it becomes annoying.