Badges 14
Moments 8
I second that!
Doesn’t reflect years of experience as military personnel!
Frustrated, Alex exclaimed, "You haven't even told me what is on the flash drive, and what do you mean by the world being in danger?" But there was no response, only silence.
Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
Eastern · B_DRAG
I thought that was the ring function?!
This was good because he was no longer afraid of turning into a maniac who slaughters for fun, and such an instinct was suppressed by calming his mind and emotions.
In Another World with My Wooden Throne System
Fantasy · Night_of_Dreams
Chapter 28, skipped few chapters. Good luck!
First, good work and keep going. The start seems promising and well written I guess. Second, since it is unclear how you will steer your story, I can only say I think Luna so far more troublesome than being useful asset to the MC for being impassive and childish. Generally I avoid "Harem" and "Comedy" because it is clichéd! Good luck! (^.^ `)
This book has been deleted.
Why would a teenager live alone in a different city/state far away from his family? A very strange story setting! And the setup is lacking
My family resided in Chicago, miles away from New York. My father, an electrician at a local factory, bore the brunt of our financial responsibilities.
The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!
Urban · WorldScholar