Grim_Ryner

8d

Commented

Don't worry about it. Just take care of yourself. Hope you recover quickly.

I apologize for the delay in posting the chapters. Unfortunately, something happened to me that I couldn't update any chapter.

One Piece: Hunter God

Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing

Grim_Ryner

16d

Commented

megatron on the table !!!!!!!!! (who get the reference )

"Vader, I need to take a shower." I said as I picked her up and brought her face close to mine. She nuzzled her face on my cheek as I laughed and said, "You can't follow me. I'm going to be nude. It's not good for underage girls to peek."

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

TV · Alittlepiggy33

Grim_Ryner

1mth

Commented

+1

How many of you are still reading this fanfiction? Type, +1. Can I get 100 comments? Who knows?

Batman x Arc Reactor

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

Grim_Ryner

2mth

Commented

Write a basic draft on how you want the story to progress (storyline). This what I mean when i said "write timeline". Keep doing your best. Take my comment as building criticism to improve your storytelling.

ch 0 6 Chapter 6 : Chapter 6 ( Bonus chapter)

Rising Shadows: Uchiha's Wrath

Anime & Comics · Flowerhead_Evan

Grim_Ryner

2mth

Commented

My advice for you, try set minimum words limit in every chapter. This will make you story for enjoyable to read. Make a timeline first and write very ideas you have. Even if you have another idea, you can try to implement the idea into your story. Try to brainstorm and write down every idea you have for the chapter. You have great ideas for this story. Many chapters doesn't guarantee a good story and short chapters can make reader lost interest. You are making story, not motivational book. Dont worry about grammar so much as you can use grammarly to fix it. Write at your own pace. Don't make a target where you need to post 3 chapters or more everyday. You can write extra chapter but always stick to your update schedule for example a chapter a day. Keep up with your effort and u can become a great writer.

ch 0 6 Chapter 6 : Chapter 6 ( Bonus chapter)

Rising Shadows: Uchiha's Wrath

Anime & Comics · Flowerhead_Evan

Grim_Ryner

4mth

Commented

a need a pic

Pikachu jumped from the window sill, jumped onto the fuselage of the mini drone, and flew quickly in the direction of Gwen...

Marvel: Transmigrated with Travelling Frog?!

Movies · RedX43

Grim_Ryner

5mth

Commented

fuh. dodge a bullet there.

That sounded really dumb. Just as I was about to shelf the idea of a name change to Oz and change it to another name I remembered something. The 'rule' told me that I would be connected to a bloodline in this wizarding world. When I adopt the inheritance of whatever that bloodline is I can also adopt their second name. I just got to hope it's not 'Osbourne'. I'm sure it'll be okay…

HP: Descendant of Merlin

Book&Literature · DarkKingGrutmore

Grim_Ryner

6mth

Commented

ch 45 Chapter 45: The Demon's Letter

DC: I am Bruce Wayne

Anime & Comics · God_Doom

Grim_Ryner

7mth

Commented

midtown high.... really??? bs

lydia - I know, child, I know. But this is a new school, a better school. They have great teaching and strict discipline. They won't tolerate any kind of violence or harassment. You'll be safe there, Felicia.