MC goes from one extreme to another. First he's low key, now he's dissing the top cadets..
With those last words, I turned back and started walking, leaving the three dumbfounded. Certainly, none of them was expecting me to behave like that since making an enemy from one of the strongest cadets in this academy wouldn't do any favor to anyone.
Fantasy 路 Darkness_Enjoyer
This is very similar to Archean Eon Art, which was was a great novel until the constant power-ups. Hopefully your novel will turn out different. Good luck.
"The day will come when I'll soar through the skies," Fang Hao's eyes glimmered with light as he raced down the time-worn mountain paths.
Eastern 路 Crown_Nyx
That's ridiculous. Following your logic, nobody should critique a novel until it's finished. I've read hundreds of chapters. I also skipped ahead and found sentences like,"I wanted to be stronger than her. I really, really tried... all of it was for nothing ..." (ch. 767) That' weak.
The appeal of a post-apocalyptic novel is the chaos and unpredictability. It's boring when you always know what happens next. There's no sense of adventure. Good start, but these constant system spoilers ruin it for me.
[The system suggests that the host should get back to the facility. During that time, when an attack is launched on the facility, the host might get a chance to get some people that might be important in the future.]
Fantasy 路 Alan_Wafula
You sure about that little dragon?
It turned out better than I expected. Keep up the good work. 馃憤
With those last words, I turned back and started walking, leaving the three dumbfounded. Certainly, none of them was expecting me to behave like that since making an enemy from one of the strongest cadets in this academy wouldn't do any favor to anyone.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy 路 Darkness_Enjoyer