*she
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Nice
ch 50 The admission exam (Part 1)
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*Aura
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*clashed
Daimon saw the result which was a crack in the target, Elizabeth changed the target to a new one and then returned to her previous spot before shooting again, the difference was that this time instead of just a bullet… a line of fire left the cannon of the gun and the result was completely different also, the target was completely destroyed and the line of fire kept moving until it clashes against the wall of the room.
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*it's important
"In the future, you are going to lead all of us, so important for you to have a good criterion, focus on the little details and take the best decision for the situation you might find in… of course you can't make some exceptions like choosing your big sister Elaine to take the main spot to hug you to sleep on weekends ♥".
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*fact
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two*
They started kissing again, while their tongues were fighting for supremacy, Aster undid the laces on her bra and removed it with his hands, he immediately felt to little soft pointy things pressing against his chest.
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*him
Aster was also evaluating the man in front of him, he had brown hair, his eye color was blue similar to Kana's one, he had beard and mustache, he was wearing pretty standard clothes, maybe because this was his house but what caught his attention was the little scars that were on the left side of his face, one on top of his eyebrow and another one over his upper lip, the aura around hum was the one of a upright and brave ruler.
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weird*
"Sorry I didn't want to say weir things, she is still with us, it's just that she can't move too much due to her frail health but she lives in the place where we will be staying, to be far from the stressful atmosphere of the capital".
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instead of "a" it should be "I"
"I also love this city, my mom used to take me here at least once a week when a was younger, unlike the capital city people here are gentle and easy to get along".
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wolf girl = good girl
Daimon couldn't help but steal a couple of glances at Aura which she immediately noticed; her tail unconsciously waggled a bit.
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I kinda really like the part of Aura moving her tail for some reason
ch 43 Show of talents
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*Daimon
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tks for the chapter
ch 35 Aura’s observations
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I guess you are missing "core", I remember that it went to sleep once before
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missing word bro
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lol, she is the best
"She is in the bag, ladies and gentlemen", she shouted in Daimon's mind.
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"appear in front of it"
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If I understood something from the other novel is that the author likes to add girls and then develop their relatonship after which I like btw, still I will suggest you to try the other way around with the next one maybe it will become a thing and it's always better to have a little of many things to make the story better
ch 33 Curiosity killed the cat
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antiacademic?
Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
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