this is stupid
ch 10 The underworld
Anime & Comics · Fuckinghell69
nice
ch 0 1 23 Marvel Verse | Have a Talk With Thanos
Anime & Comics · 4Eyes
"I understand your point, and I think you should rewrite this story or at least this chapter. Let's change it so that the protagonist can only gain powers from beings that are strong, not from mortals who have no power whatsoever. I don't mind an evil protagonist, but I have an issue with characters being evil just for the sake of it. I'm not trying to change your story, but I'm just saying that it has to make sense why he is evil.
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Anime & Comics · 4Eyes
That is incredibly foolish. Anyone with a functioning brain would find this concept absurd. The characters in DXD are not ignorant. Are you suggesting we reduce their intelligence to that of a toddler? There are gods who have lived for millions or even billions of years in DXD, and let's not forget about Big Red; as soon as the MC comes to the world, he will 100% come to kill him. Some of these gods possess the power to foresee the future. If they see the protagonist's actions leading to catastrophe, they would likely eliminate him without hesitation. However, I'm concerned that you will grant him plot armor, as is often the case with web novel authors. Regardless of how nonsensical his actions are, everything seems to conveniently go his way. This needs to make sense.
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Anime & Comics · 4Eyes
why the hell is the chapter so fucking short ? _________________________________________________________________________________________
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Anime & Comics · The_Procrastinator