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why did you stop updating this novel it was so good _____________________________________________________________________________________

no this a good novel keep up the good work

this good novel fun to read please keep up the good work ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.

i understand but why make him a cat of all things and let him act like a pet i will change the rating to 3 stars later on

I love the story, but why did you have to stop two good fanfics and then just start another novel, like Unique Gamers Travels? Now, it takes longer for a new chapter to be added lately. Travels of the Daughter of God was enjoyable; it was more enjoyable than Unique Gamers Travels.

Yes and no. I would give a story 2 to 3 stars if it's one that I may not enjoy, but the overall story is good even if I don't like it. However, this story was rated 4.8 when I wrote this review. I found it disappointing; I had hoped the story would have more substance. It was boring and not worth the time spent reading. It felt like a waste of hours of my life.

The protagonist's apparent lack of control over their own fate raises questions about their role in the story, casting them more as a pawn than a central figure. Despite their awareness of Doflamingo's ruthlessness, their steadfast loyalty feels unrealistic and strains believability. While it's natural for characters to admire others, the protagonist's unwavering devotion to Doflamingo seems difficult to reconcile with their knowledge of his darker deeds. It's hard to fully immerse oneself in the story when such inconsistencies arise, leaving the reader feeling disconnected and frustrated. Overall, this aspect detracts from the novel's overall enjoyment and impact.

No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.

The story was generated by AI, making it unlikable and boring to read. There are too many words that don't convey much meaning, and it feels off. It seems like there isn't a single chapter written by a human.

The pacing of this story is incredibly fast, leaving little room for character development or attachment. The protagonist gains power too quickly, making the progression feel rushed and lacking in depth. Additionally, the narrative lacks detail, with events occurring abruptly without sufficient explanation or context. Overall, the story could benefit from a slower pace and more attention to character growth and world-building.

good >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

this a good novel _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________