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Just another bad story. Thats all i can say. Just... Bad.

Hmm... Now i don't wonna read this fic xDD

Just bad. I don't even now what to say about that fic.

Well... After reading chapter 51, I can only say that I am disappointed. Not much, but enough to make me think about the “advisability” of continuing reading. The beginning was not bad - fast and did not inspire much negativity. Mc just wanted to use the system and reforge his fat body. There he met several pleasant characters, whose interactions were pleasant to watch. Thus, the fanfic seemed like something promising even considering the notorious Harem. But the further the story went, the less intrigue there remained. Girls... Well, by chapter 51 it was as if they weren't even there. I mean, MC got the girl he wanted. Two more are interested in him (and probably even more in the future) but... That's all I can say about all the relationships. And no, I'm not talking about Mc not taking steps towards a relationship. It’s just that instead of showing how they communicated, got closer and interacted in every possible way, the girls simply “exist”. Like footnotes in newspapers: "Mc likes girl number 1; girl number 1 fell in love with Mc after a couple of months; Mc knows about the girl's feelings and periodically thinks about this topic; The girl finally stood next to Mc because he was kind to her over the past time from the beginning of their acquaintance" What is my personal problem? - in the almost complete lack of interactions between the love interests and Mc. Only the Main Girl deserved a few bonding chapters, and the rest always happened behind the scenes. (Poor BestGirl Serenity) I also cannot help but mention the fact that Mc is a deity. Say what you want, think what you want, but he already has the power to topple most Universes with a snap of his fingers. And he has not yet received a random low divine-level ability, for which he saved up most of the fic, almost without spending system points on other enhancements and abilities. I don't even want to think how ridiculous his powers will become after, say, another 50 chapters. It's just not interesting. Especially when he gains power literally out of the blue, without any special difficulties or efforts of will! God! Even his training Arc from the beginning was skipped! Do you know what my biggest disappointment is? The fact is that the Author is clearly able to write everything I described above at the proper level - after all, he has already done this in THIS SAME FANFIC. The author often shows his real abilities, but always, when his skills begin to shine, a damn SYSTEM or another “Adventure” comes in, which I will not describe, since so far these have been the most boring parts of the story. As a result, I was left confused. I’ll try to read more, but I don’t think anything will change - so far it’s only gotten worse. I will also add on my own behalf so that the Author will not be offended by my review. You're clearly a capable fanfic writer, and considering I paid for the reading with nothing more than a cosmic good health wish, I didn't waste my time. At least one evening was brightened up by a not so bad story and I hope that the Author can improve his skills so that I can continue to read good stories for free! Thanks and good luck to everyone who read this entire piece!

Well, I was very pleased with the beginning and extremely discouraged by everything that started later. This story is not about Naruto and his ninja ways, but about his sex life. And all this is written so well that for a long time you may not even understand what the essence of the story is in the end. And although I want to know what will happen next (I read up to chapter 34), I didn’t come for “that kind of” content. Overall, another disappointment that I was somehow pleased with. Strange but not bad. Not for everyone.

I must say right away that I have no negative thoughts in relation to you as an author of fanfiction. It's just that the whole MC thought process makes me cringe and question what I'm wasting my time on) In general, I simply cannot help but perceive this fanfic as a story about the fulfillment of desires - And fanfiction does its job very tastelessly. Inexperience in work also makes a significant contribution, since so far there has not been a single interesting character or event on the pages. So far, everything feels banal and empty - MC, Roxanne (and her ever-swaying breasts - who have received almost as much attention as the girl herself) everyone else. Literally not one PERSON deserving attention. Secondary nature and the absence of any kind of intrigue is the path to a bad story. And while I know it's a bad idea to demand a lot from random free fanfiction off the internet, I'd still like to get a taste of something good. And there MAY be something good, but I haven't seen any improvement in the chapters I've read. Again, I'm not trying to discourage you - practice, work and think about how to make your story better. (without fanaticism of course) It is quite possible that in the future you will have a really good book.

I've read up to chapter 26 so far. Gotta know, the idea for a fanfic isn't bad, but the MC's interactions with the world are just... empty. MC frankly simp for Roxanne, and in a bad way. It makes me cringe in shame at times. "Roxanne is my woman. My slave!" Who even talks like that? Even if Roxanne is objectively beautiful and has a nice personality, it doesn't mean that a person should act like a fan who gets the opportunity to date their idol. Well, for now I'll stop there, but if nothing changes in the future, then I'm afraid the fanfic will slide into another tasteless fulfillment of the author's innermost desires on paper.

Hello! I wanted to say something bad here, write about a lack of history or speculate about the problems in the life of the Author of this work, but ... I just can't. This Fanfiction is good no matter how I look at it. I don't even know how to praise the clever use of characters from the original stories. I'm afraid to spoil anything for those people who look at the reviews. The only thing that can really turn the reader off is their personal assumptions, like hatred for Harems (I understand this) All in all, feel free to read and enjoy. It may not be the best book you've ever read, but you'll definitely remember it. As thanks for a great time, I'll leave 5 stars here and some from my personal collection - enjoy!